Don't dig the super personality shift at, otherwise story is alright

Man fuck that Anko get what she deserves im tired of people saying that she had a hard time when she didn’t at most she got eyes or look at with distrust and maybe named call but that’s it but at least she knows why their doing it and it’s her own no one forced her to leave the village with Orochimaru she did that on her own so she needs to take responsibility for her own actions

...I can't stand it!

KONOHA! NOT 'KOHONA'!

I don't mind Anko getting beat up when necessary, b7t I stilly sympathize with her character for what she went through so yeah, mixed feelings.

hinatashit is only with kibashit !

Konoha 12 Parent's Names:

Naruto; Minato Namikaze/Arashi Kazuma, & Kushina Uzumaki aka Hikari as you call her.

Sasuke: Fugaku and Mikoto.

Sakura: Kizashi and Mebuki.

Lee and Tenten: parents were never named or seen. Many rumors say that Lee is Guy's illegitimate son with an unknown woman as Lee's mother.

Neji: Hizashi Hyuga, mother was never named or seen, but fannon goes with Hitomi and Hikari etc. Also the maid Natsu Hyuga is rumored to possibly be his mother or elder sister.

Hinata: Hiashi, mother was never named, but fannon goes with Hitomi and Hikari etc.

Kiba: Tsume, father was never named or seen.

Shino: Shibi, mother was never named or seen.

Ino: Inoichi, mother was seen but not named.

Chouji: Chouza, was was seen but not named.

Shikamaru: Shikaku and Yoshino.

First time I’ve come across this story and the moment I heard gaara and his siblings were in Konoha I immediately thought of terra being the female that would show up with raven as a MAYBE possibility of showing up. Terra because of the reason explained here. She had control of earth so that’s why I thought of her.

Dam I wish I knew about this back when it was being worked on. Now to see how the other chapters turn out and if I have reason to comment on a guess. I do wonder if the girls end up being bisexual in the story for the whole harem thing though. That would be funny. Oh and thanks for making Haku a girl and part of it with them. I was hoping for that. I always feel those three are a good pain with harems. Other wish Naruto and Hinata only.

One, I read this long ago. I find many things at fault with it. Including many points others have made.
I also generally despise the kowtowing to “demons can be human, too” stuff. Yeah, balderdash.
But, I can honestly say that you don’t need to listen to somebody if they start spouting crock about you “needing to die”. Those people are being immature and do not need to be given attention.
So, this is actually one of your more preferable stories, in some capacity.
Admittedly, too many “harem”/ many wives stories are fanciful tales of lust and self-service that are best burned.
But, in some way, you actually manage to establish something somewhat graspable in this fic.
So, that’s my position. Hope you come to Jesus.

Uhm molto bene!
Una storia nuova con nuove abilità e caratteristiche!
Chissa che diavolo accadrà!

hana in this dog whore all the dogs humping her like a bitach she is lol

anko in this you snake whore

look it cool noone was born bad or evil not even lucifer aka satan was an angel gods right hand man before he turned evil

Was that foreshadowing that Naruto might be Yusuke’s descendant and a possible Mozuku?

makes no sense iwa used the red cloud cloak people before so the fact the builder dude has no idea who they are makes no sense.

this makes no sense haku would end kiba in secounds