Reviews for Conspiracies and Deception |
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Shinobi Gatana chapter 4 . 1/2/2016 Thanks for your hard work. |
Shinobi Gatana chapter 1 . 1/2/2016 Slade is the Kyuubi... But... but... derp... Okay... trying to regain sanity. Deadpool level of sanity at least... |
Dragon0905 chapter 42 . 11/15/2015 Okay overall, not bad. The grammar sucks...BADLY. Many, many, many times you left out words and far more times you inverted the meaning of your statement by saying things like they are, instead of are not or aren't. Otherwise the only problem I personally saw with this was introducing so many people from different series just to rip off the best skills from them. Most were never heard from again after he got their prized skills from them. |
TeresaLynne chapter 23 . 10/8/2015 Shrugs... I think Hinata's wrong to ask for mercy, but I can understand why. Neji's spent years giving her a hard time for something she was not responsible for in any way. He deserves the painful wake up call that Naruto's going to give him. But, thanks for the chapter! :) |
IansInsane chapter 6 . 8/4/2015 Ha! Iam glad I have this the benefit of the doubt! |
IansInsane chapter 1 . 8/4/2015 I'll give you the benefit of the doubt... Impress me. |
Nekoyasha12 chapter 15 . 7/10/2015 The only two I can think it could be are Raven since she's a demon, and Starfire because she's an alien. However, I'm leaning more towards Raven since her being a demon and all will logically fit with this fic. x3 |
QuentinTNT chapter 42 . 7/5/2015 You should had it was a harem. Maybe. Or well. It was funny to say the most. Anko really can get embarrass a lot. |
QuentinTNT chapter 42 . 7/5/2015 Great Fanfic. It was the greatest funniest on let I read. |
Tepheris chapter 6 . 5/7/2015 I'm sorry, but there's something I just have to blast you for. 'Someone i-is t-talking a-about m-me. B-but w-ho?' thought Hinata You had Hinata stutter IN HER THOUGHTS. Now, unless Hinata is making a concious effort to stutter, she wouldn't stutter IN HER THOUGHTS. Someone's mouth might not be able to keep up with their thoughts, BUT NO-ONE STUTTERS IN THEIR THOUGHTS. It just doesn't happen. Even if someone tried to stutter, the thoughts in their mind would be more like "I'm going to stutter out: Someone is talking about me. But who?" |
Guest chapter 41 . 4/24/2015 no I Robert Krause will be with you on this too . |
epic insanity666 chapter 2 . 3/7/2015 i fucking love slade, he a bad ass in villain form |
pedrofaria339 chapter 17 . 2/18/2015 if you stop to think about it, it was kind of obivious, who Shukaku would have been |
pedrofaria339 chapter 13 . 2/17/2015 I agree, A face and body like that, has no right to be on a boy, it's just not right, Haku HAS to be a girl |
PokemonGuy151 chapter 42 . 2/17/2015 I liked the story, there aren't enough well executed non-evil kyuubi stories out there. |