Reviews for Conspiracies and Deception
Dragon0905 chapter 42 . 11/15/2015
Okay overall, not bad. The grammar sucks...BADLY. Many, many, many times you left out words and far more times you inverted the meaning of your statement by saying things like they are, instead of are not or aren't. Otherwise the only problem I personally saw with this was introducing so many people from different series just to rip off the best skills from them. Most were never heard from again after he got their prized skills from them.
TeresaLynne chapter 23 . 10/8/2015
Shrugs... I think Hinata's wrong to ask for mercy, but I can understand why. Neji's spent years giving her a hard time for something she was not responsible for in any way. He deserves the painful wake up call that Naruto's going to give him. But, thanks for the chapter! :)
IansInsane chapter 6 . 8/4/2015
Ha!
Iam glad I have this the benefit of the doubt!
IansInsane chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
I'll give you the benefit of the doubt...
Impress me.
Nekoyasha12 chapter 15 . 7/10/2015
The only two I can think it could be are Raven since she's a demon, and Starfire because she's an alien.
However, I'm leaning more towards Raven since her being a demon and all will logically fit with this fic. x3
QuentinTNT chapter 42 . 7/5/2015
You should had it was a harem. Maybe. Or well.
It was funny to say the most. Anko really can get embarrass a lot.
QuentinTNT chapter 42 . 7/5/2015
Great Fanfic. It was the greatest funniest on let I read.
Tepheris chapter 6 . 5/7/2015
I'm sorry, but there's something I just have to blast you for.
'Someone i-is t-talking a-about m-me. B-but w-ho?' thought Hinata
You had Hinata stutter IN HER THOUGHTS. Now, unless Hinata is making a concious effort to stutter, she wouldn't stutter IN HER THOUGHTS. Someone's mouth might not be able to keep up with their thoughts, BUT NO-ONE STUTTERS IN THEIR THOUGHTS. It just doesn't happen. Even if someone tried to stutter, the thoughts in their mind would be more like "I'm going to stutter out: Someone is talking about me. But who?"
Guest chapter 41 . 4/24/2015
no I Robert Krause will be with you on this too .
epic insanity666 chapter 2 . 3/7/2015
i fucking love slade, he a bad ass in villain form
pedrofaria339 chapter 17 . 2/18/2015
if you stop to think about it, it was kind of obivious, who Shukaku would have been
pedrofaria339 chapter 13 . 2/17/2015
I agree, A face and body like that, has no right to be on a boy, it's just not right, Haku HAS to be a girl
PokemonGuy151 chapter 42 . 2/17/2015
I liked the story, there aren't enough well executed non-evil kyuubi stories out there.
Guest chapter 40 . 1/13/2015
Why didan't you have kushina there hm...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
I love it a lot . .tnx for making this story :)
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