Reviews for Who Will I ask?
Falcon-Reeves chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
Hooray! I love plots like these, no joke. A dance is a perfect set up for some romance and comedy and even a little drama. Don't take this wrong way or anything, but I did kinda feel like I was reading a script, not a fic. In order for the reader to see a beautifully painted picture of the story in his head, it's helpful to describe the setting or what all of the characters look like. For instance, if I wasn't an avid SBK fan, I would have no idea what Nancy looks like or Linda...etc. The dialouge, however, in this fic is golden, keep up the interesting read _
Princess pac chapter 2 . 8/30/2006
Nice! Except, you might want to change the rating to K, because you used a few language words. Update again soon!
Princess pac chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
This sounds like an asweome story! Will you also check out some of my SBK fanfics? (you don't have to of you don't want to.) Update soon! This is getting exciting!