|Reviews for If Someone Loves You, Wouldn't They Say So?|
| P chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
Did you really feel that way?
Its well written, although I think I did find one spelling error
| Blue Eyes Shining Dragon chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
The idea behind the story is solid, and the characterization is great. Best of all, the question at the heart of the story-does Sally REALLY love Sonic-is never definitively answered, making Sonic's struggle to understand her feelings for him the audience's struggle too. Some of the prose needs a little cleaning up, and there is a slight overuse of thought-dialogue, but beyond that this is solid stuff.
Score: 4.0 out of 5.0
| Wingless Rain chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
There are a couple of errors, but nothing that really distracts from the story. You need to vary your vocabulary more, and add more description.
| Dark Fox Tailz chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Hey Brian we were starting to wonder what became of you. And I just wanted to say glad to have you back. Plus I also wnated to know if your ever going to update/finish that one story titled Youth of a Nation! Because you left off with Tails and Griff Goat finding Amy OD from drugs witch was about almost four years ago if I recall.