Reviews for First Kiss
OnlyDarknessAwaits1369 chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
Would've wish for more but I think the ending was good enough. Cute and lovely. I like it when Kakashi gets jealous over Mizuki, I mean really, its those kind of moments where butterflies viciously flutters inside your belly despite the gentle creatures they usually are. Good story!

Peachflower chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
V. cute! Love it
liqiu03 chapter 2 . 4/5/2012
You've left a cliffhanger as an ending! It's okay..but one(like me) would think I would like to read another chap or a sequel of this fic..I just want to satisfy my desires..hehe...Ü
Vega1301 chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
gaaaahh! I wanted to hear-erm read- Kakashi say : you weren't hallucinating pff. But it was an awesome story! loved it!
EL chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
All I want to say is...

"KYAAaaaaahh!" that's so sweet and nice! Like the last part! XD
Ilamay chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
I love it! So sweet...
TheEndofTag chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
aw...kakashi and iruka are defintely meant to be...two peas in a pod or gloves fitting nicely with hands...
Dinesha chapter 2 . 8/31/2009
great story...this ending was good but would love to know kakashis reaction and if it ever dawns on iruka that it was love those cliff hangers...they tease and taunt _
VioletIsInPain chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
AW i like this story it shows a sweeter side to the kakashi/iruka relationship, not the regular sex, sex, sex, serious conversation, sex,sex, sex, ugh that gets boring after a while!

this was really well written and it didnt just drag on boringly like some other stories do!
unsaisonenenfer chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Oh god. Cutest thing EVER. So sorry for the lack of a proper review, but I couldn't hold myself back
Ame Mika'zuki chapter 2 . 1/21/2008
*screams* The cliff-hanger effect ending! ...Don't get me wrong though, it works really well. And I do like it, 'cause right after I read the line Kakashi's shocked face pops into my mind (complete with the hanging jaw!). Utterly hilarious.~ XD

Thanks for the great read!
Krazy Naoko chapter 2 . 1/12/2008
How cute! I really liked this one n_n


Krazy Naoko
freysan chapter 2 . 5/11/2007
oh, should have continued it...

but it's okay...luved it...(n.n)
morbiDreamscape chapter 2 . 4/12/2007
Even though the grammar and spelling isn't that great, you manage to create the most wonderful "moods" and bring out true, believable emotion in these characters. With a beta-reader, you'd be unbeatable! XD
iShorIBara chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
omg i love this! Shonen ainess! It's so cute. you inspire me too write more! KakaxIru rules...ok love the story bye

Love It!

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