Reviews for First Kiss
OnlyDarknessAwaits1369 chapter 2 . 3/29
Would've wish for more but I think the ending was good enough. Cute and lovely. I like it when Kakashi gets jealous over Mizuki, I mean really, its those kind of moments where butterflies viciously flutters inside your belly despite the gentle creatures they usually are. Good story!

-ODA1369
Peachflower chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
V. cute! Love it
liqiu03 chapter 2 . 4/5/2012
You've left a cliffhanger as an ending! It's okay..but one(like me) would think I would like to read another chap or a sequel of this fic..I just want to satisfy my desires..hehe...Ü
Vega1301 chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
gaaaahh! I wanted to hear-erm read- Kakashi say : you weren't hallucinating pff. But it was an awesome story! loved it!
EL chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
All I want to say is...

"KYAAaaaaahh!" that's so sweet and nice! Like the last part! XD
Ilamay chapter 2 . 2/3/2010
I love it! So sweet...
TheEndofTag chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
aw...kakashi and iruka are defintely meant to be...two peas in a pod or gloves fitting nicely with hands...
Dinesha chapter 2 . 8/31/2009
great story...this ending was good but would love to know kakashis reaction and if it ever dawns on iruka that it was kakashi...lol...gotta love those cliff hangers...they tease and taunt you...lol _
VioletIsInPain chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
AW i like this story it shows a sweeter side to the kakashi/iruka relationship, not the regular sex, sex, sex, serious conversation, sex,sex, sex, ugh that gets boring after a while!

this was really well written and it didnt just drag on boringly like some other stories do!
unsaisonenenfer chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
Oh god. Cutest thing EVER. So sorry for the lack of a proper review, but I couldn't hold myself back
Ame Mika'zuki chapter 2 . 1/21/2008
*screams* The cliff-hanger effect ending! ...Don't get me wrong though, it works really well. And I do like it, 'cause right after I read the line Kakashi's shocked face pops into my mind (complete with the hanging jaw!). Utterly hilarious. XD

Thanks for the great read!
Krazy Naoko chapter 2 . 1/12/2008
How cute! I really liked this one n_n

Janna!

Krazy Naoko
freysan chapter 2 . 5/11/2007
oh, oh...you should have continued it...

but it's okay...luved it...(n.n)
morbiDreamscape chapter 2 . 4/12/2007
Even though the grammar and spelling isn't that great, you manage to create the most wonderful "moods" and bring out true, believable emotion in these characters. With a beta-reader, you'd be unbeatable! XD
iShorIBara chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
omg i love this! Shonen ainess! It's so cute. you inspire me too write more! KakaxIru rules...ok love the story bye

Love It!

HeL
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