Reviews for He Who Laughs Last |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious. |
![]() ![]() Ah! Yes! Yes yes yes... I loved this. Aw, man Skywarp SO had that coming to him. Hehe. My sister told me about this fic but she failed to mention Soundwave's revenge. Imagine my surprise when I got through with Skywarp's part only to fine out I was only half way through the entire fic? It was a nice surprise. Good job, really. It was great... And the look that Megatron gave Starscream! Haha, like he had anything to do with it. But then again... with megatron, everything is Starscream's fault. " 'What're you looking at me for?!' Starscream demanded to know, outraged. " Really, it is such a Megatron and Starscream-ish thing to happen. Haha. Thanks for this laugh. It really was great. Go Team SkyWarp! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, this is an oldie. I had to bite down on my knuckles to keep from laughing too loud, since I didn't want to wake my daughter. This was one of the most hilarious one-shots I've ever come across. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was GREAT! hahahaha Skywarp and Soundwave are my two favourite Decepticons ever! haha I wish more was written about them like this xD xoxo Krazi-1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This, my friend, is absolutely hilarious. I was in stitches by the end of the page. Ingenious, Skywarp! Nothing! How amazing that his walnut-sized processor ever thought of that... Over all, this is a well-written and very amusing story. It's very clear, and a quick, fun read. I think that if you cut down on a few adjectives, it would help out a lot. Once again, wonderful story. 5/5! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() They painted him PINK? LOL, poor Skywarp. Though he probably deserved it, if he managed to elicit an emotional outburst from Soundwave, which is probably as impossible as getting one from Prowl. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOLOLOLOLOOOOOOL. I freaking adored this, really...did you do a prequel or sequel to this, btb? Such a promising story :'3 well done, really. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() *laughs hysterically* Oh man. I love Soundwave. He's so...Soundwave. I love the way you wrote feelings into him because some authors don't do that. I mean, he's a normal mech, just reserved and, in my opinion, shy. It's nice to see a devious side to the stotic mech most people see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious! I really love that the ultimate prank is not pranking Soundwave at all. Poor paranoid Soundwave! |
![]() ![]() Hahaha- Great story! Got me laughing- you write well, keep up the good work! "You must be this tall to terrorize Earth" gold. : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I LOVE this! Hilarious! |
![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was hilarious! The best things come for those who know how to be patient, and Skywarp made a remarkable demonstration of the art of being subtle. He has never been portrayed as the smartest Decepticon despite there was no evidence in the show that would sustain so. I applaud the way you wrote him, a real tactician and studious of his victim to be. As for the later, oh my… poor Soundwave. He got attacked precisely where it hurts the most. His emotionless and reserved behavior being shattered like that, so much for his safety zone. The payback was priceless! Warp learned his lesson too, though the fact of actually having Soundwave reacted so emotionally surely compensated his new pink self. This was beautiful to read. Besides the great story and development of the characters, you did a great job in descriptions and you are so skilled in taking your readers to powerful and believable mental images. It was great to see how such a wonderful writer as yourself moves so smoothly in the lands of humor too. Thanks for this story :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, Soundwave snapping SO MUCH LOVE. I adore Skywarp the prankster. :D For some reason one of my favourite lines in here, though, is the random one about Megatron and Starscream having a civilised conversation in the control room. :D |