Had good pace and well thought out storyline. Enjoyed the read :)

Poor Yuffie :( It's amazing how similar she is to Vincent; they both hide their real feelings and carry this heavy load of guilt, yet it manifests in completely different ways.

I also agree with the Cloud and Tifa bit - I just can't see him letting go of Aerith. To be frank, most FF-heroes of the mopey kind seem bereft of any real amorous desires - they only love in order to lose so they can be allowed to embrace their inner angst.

Really I love your stories. I cry, I laugh, and I just love reading your works

awwwwww. this was cute but i totally love sunshine in winter more. but this was good too3 i love you.

I LOVE YOU

Well done! Thanks for posting your story. I really enjoyed reading it. :-)

how come the alligning was weird? i han't noticed that when i was using my sis's PSP. oh well. that doesnn't change my opinion...

this was good. just the cuteness i was looking for.

nice job!

AH! OH GOODNESS!

I loved this story! :DD And all of its yuffiexvincentness because they are just the radness.

I swam and bounced and ate the fluffiness like marshmallows! XD

("Too dry," Cloud said absently. "The flowers are wilting. Aeris

dislikes this weather.

Both of the girls had grown to take no notice of Cloud's talking of

women long dead as if they were still there. It was better not to ask.)

*head desk* I love your Cloud. He's better than canon McEmoPants!/ConfusedlySad!Cloud because he's still messed up in the head and obsessed with dead people but at least he's cool and goofy and corny about it, on top of being socially awkward and a;foeijsl;dfa.

("Grief lasts forever." He used his claw to balance them, closing his

own eyes as images freely danced along his eyelids. "But eventually you

feel it less, and less…")

Your observations are flippant and yet perfect; this is a sucky piece I picked but really if I cut and pasted everything the whole fic and all three chapters would be in here. At first I refused to read ("Yuffie? Vincent? *ERROR. PLEASE REINSTALL UNIVERSE*) but then I was recced the ever fabulous 'Tastes Like Green' and I'm slowly eating through all of your stuff. I used to think the only ship I would ever approve of for my Yuffie-muffin's happiness would be if she could clone herself, but you have completely changed my mind with her and Vampire Man's retardedly cute relationships where Yuffie kinda unretards him but not really because the retardedness is endearing to her while her ADD lingers on it.

("You're trying to die while you're still living," Yuffie continued to rage.

"And it's not worth it! Don't be her, Vincent. If she'd loved you enough,

she wouldn't have taken her own li - "

With a snarling scream, Chaos wings broke out his back, his face

contorting in pain as the changes went through his body. The

Chaos demon was too impatient to wait; he grabbed Yuffie, ready to

squeeze her little body's bones to dust, ready to spill her blood -)

Thank you so much for keeping Vincent scary. He would scare the crap out of me and I'd probably pee my pants. I definitely like your later fics better but this one, though a bit fast and rocky, tied up so wonderfully and there's just so many delicious pieces I can't help but fall in love with it like everything else.

Your Tifa kicks ass too. And Barret. ;aifwdwfawe I love Barret. And Cait Sith. People always forget about him. And don't get me started on your Cid. He's every cranky piece of love I got a hard on for.

Kawii this is soo cute I love it

:)

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

"Do you want breakfast either? I can always shove my fist down your

throat!"

"Hah! Watch me tremble!"

"Reeve was so on drugs when he made you, cat."

"Same to your mamma!"

PAHAHA.

But in the end, this chapter was sad. :(

Aw. So cute. I love how you write the interaction between Yuffie and Vinnie!

oh gawd, your writing style and characterizations are so amazing that they just make me wanna burn everything I've ever written from sheer embarrassment..

anyhoo loved, loved, LOVED this! the whole thing, all your portrayals of Yuff and Vin...EVERYTHING XD

This story was grea, it had enough plot to keep me satisfied this kind of writing is just right for a person to read. I could easily say that it was the most developed and in depth story I have ever read on I especially loved the ending please continue writing for my sake. :3

I liked it! I really did. Yuffie getting over death leaves so much room to start a Yuffentine. Very well done.