|Reviews for Watching|
| EternalLoyalty chapter 1 . 3/7
Whoa... that stabbed me in the heart...
| yog fan 1 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
Wow that was deep · ·
| MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
| Kibble Beast chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
the anime/manga does tend to skip over how tragic and brutal ninja life is...
and i like how you've contrasted their innocence now with how they lose it. :)
| switchitt chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
oh my god that is just so sad.
| Illucida chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
So true. "Child hood ends too soon."
| Sienna Maiu chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
ooh... how sinister.
| clarius elazul chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
It's so beautiful. Childhood is too short and for shinobi these carefree moments should be treasured. I loved Kakashi musings about the future of the team, even if it brings a sad feeling.
| vanlaria chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I really love the last bit; that they will be ninjas forever and children not long enough.
| ToriMiu chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Ah, that is sso sweet! . I LOVE Kakashi. It's so sad! You're an amazing author! Keep writing!
| Gawd Complex chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
And another great oneshot.
I hate reviewing oneshots, because they're hard to judge but, seriously, I love yours. And even though I don't know what to say about them, I still belive this one needed one more positive review. :D
| TheElvenBookwyrm chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Well written, once again. It is deep and has a primitive beauty. I have only recently come to know about Naruto, and the only place I can fulfill my addiction is on Cartoon Network, which means I have only seen the first couple of seasons.
| Itallia chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Ah, that's kind of sad. But it's a good way of describing what happened/will happen. I esp. liked the way you implied that they're all missing the correct time to do things, like with Sakura not being interested in boys when she "should." It seemed very realistic.
| Kane Shi Megami chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
*wails* OMG that is such a beautiful piece it actually teared me up! FAVS definately.
| Ingu chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Wow, this is brilliant! So sweet and sad. This is the first Naruto fanfic I've read, and I'm so glad I found such a good one. You're a great writer! _