Reviews for Watching
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
This is so good!
The beginning was so cute and adorable!
And then it got so sad!
I love this!
Morizono Kat chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
hmmm... sober... very sober
WraithFaithUnstable chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
This is actually really sad.
I like it.
but i dont.
But i do...
EternalLoyalty chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Whoa... that stabbed me in the heart...
yog fan 1 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
Wow that was deep · ·
MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Beautiful story.
Kibble Beast chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
sad observations.

the anime/manga does tend to skip over how tragic and brutal ninja life is...

and i like how you've contrasted their innocence now with how they lose it. :)
switchitt chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
oh my god that is just so sad.
LucidKren chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
So true. "Child hood ends too soon."

Good job!
Sienna Maiu chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
ooh... how sinister.

clarius elazul chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
It's so beautiful. Childhood is too short and for shinobi these carefree moments should be treasured. I loved Kakashi musings about the future of the team, even if it brings a sad feeling.
vanlaria chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I really love the last bit; that they will be ninjas forever and children not long enough.
ToriMiu chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Ah, that is sso sweet! . I LOVE Kakashi. It's so sad! You're an amazing author! Keep writing!

Gawd Complex chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
And another great oneshot.

I hate reviewing oneshots, because they're hard to judge but, seriously, I love yours. And even though I don't know what to say about them, I still belive this one needed one more positive review. :D
TheElvenBookwyrm chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Well written, once again. It is deep and has a primitive beauty. I have only recently come to know about Naruto, and the only place I can fulfill my addiction is on Cartoon Network, which means I have only seen the first couple of seasons.
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