Poor Fantine. I agree with the other reviewers...Fantine needs more attention. And it's just so sad, how Blacheville didn't recognise her.

So sad...

Your writing is absolutely lovely. The last line is truly heartbreaking as well. Poor Fantine! It’s nice to see some Fantine fic around her though. She lacks so much love for being such an awesome character.

Very sad. Very pretty use of symbolism too!

I especially like the last line-

"Once crystal is shattered, it never again can be made into exactly what it was before. Fantine knew that her field of roses would never grow again."

Wow...I almost forgot to breathe. Your style is very distinct-I like how you didn't include any dialogue, only what was going on in Fantine's head. Found this not at all corny (very glad to read that the man she recognized was NOT Tholomyés). Also enjoyed the imagery, especially the symbolism embodied by the field of roses and crystal. We need more pieces like this!

*gulp* This is so beautiful! I really like Fantine, and I'm glad you wrote such a moving story about her.

Great job! I hope to see something else from you, and soon. Your writing is great. :)