|Reviews for Gloom|
| backup2backup chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
*W* so cute! you are an amazing writer
| nukagirl chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
| RikuTakahashi chapter 1 . 10/6/2007
lmao chicks and ducks...this would make a great(ly appreciated) multichapter...
| naruto0616 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Oo...love the ending, it really leaves you hanging.
| Night-Alchemist05 chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
OMG! I LUV IT! So cute! lol!
| kiiroi yumetobu chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
oh... *sob* *sob* this is so sweet... it's going into my favs! *sob* *sob*
| Shadewolf7 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Cute... why on earth does Colonel Mustang have pajamas with ducks and chicks printed on them?
| Meyham chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
That was cute, but some more back story would be nice. How did Ed and Roy get so close since Al died? (He is dead, right?)Good grammar. 7/10. Too short [the story, not Ed ;)]. NEED MORE!
| Rei-Sanjo chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
*cries* I loofed it.
| Rocket MS17 chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
OMFG AL DIED -sobsob-
I like it.
I wish Ed would snuggle with /me/. :,(
| YvonneandNeji chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I love it.
| loser in the gutter chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
aw! that was so sweet! and kinda sad... but still really nice!
| hot-chick1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
AW! Believe it or not this is the first story that I've read of these two that wasn't rated M! Oo; go figure... Anyway, I loved it, my only thing is that I thought it was a little rushed and I wish it had been a tad bit longer... Other than that it was great keep up the good work! b-d
| All Kinds of Awsome chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
| crazybritoutforevenge chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
I reall like your writing style, it's really beautiful. How you describe their apperance and the chemistry is so.. so worth sighing for, like that romantic sigh you get when your like ;sighing "they so belong together" or "that's so beautiful" kinda thing. Oh look at me blabbing I'm terrible at writing reviews I really am. Anyway I love your story and it's so going in my favs!