Reviews for Branching Out
VAPX007 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Hi The Lauderdale

Nice continuation on this story.

The bit on hypnosis was an initial surprise to me because The Voice hadn't used that ability before.

I love the little sideline fight in the club, I thought it was actually kinda cute. Also I love the limping part. Clearly a hand to hand is the first thing The Voice will attempt to avoid.

Oh, and great 'stay tuned' bit at the end with the lighthouse!

Great stuff!

Your Friend in Writing,

VAPX007
loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Nice sequal
BluePard chapter 1 . 10/7/2001
I like DW better in this one, tho he's still a weirdo. Having Gosalyn give the hint rather than DWD coming up with it because of the incident is a bit stretched. Men in drag in DWD... hm. I want more on The Voice's past at this point.
Crash chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
Nice follow-up. Interesting justification for turning Voice from petty crook to Super-V. On to part 3...