|Reviews for Branching Out|
| VAPX007 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Hi The Lauderdale
Nice continuation on this story.
The bit on hypnosis was an initial surprise to me because The Voice hadn't used that ability before.
I love the little sideline fight in the club, I thought it was actually kinda cute. Also I love the limping part. Clearly a hand to hand is the first thing The Voice will attempt to avoid.
Oh, and great 'stay tuned' bit at the end with the lighthouse!
Your Friend in Writing,
| loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
| BluePard chapter 1 . 10/7/2001
I like DW better in this one, tho he's still a weirdo. Having Gosalyn give the hint rather than DWD coming up with it because of the incident is a bit stretched. Men in drag in DWD... hm. I want more on The Voice's past at this point.
| Crash chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
Nice follow-up. Interesting justification for turning Voice from petty crook to Super-V. On to part 3...