Reviews for Laying Claim |
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![]() ![]() Great story I love SasuSaku so freaking much. |
![]() ![]() I love this story! Right off the bat, I figured Sasuke's reason for purchasing Sakura would've been for her own protection. I'll be reading your new story as well. I cannot wait. |
![]() ![]() Still one of my fave authors on here god I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a really nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start! |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this story...! Absolutely amazing! And sneak spoiler of Love and in War is so good too..! Cant wait to read more of ur stories. Love SasuSaku so much! Fighting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i read this so long ago and idk why I was suddenly hit with a wave of nostalgia and the urge to read this again, but I'm sure glad I did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() THANK YOU FOR THIS. This was such a beautiful story and the ending made me cry! It's so perfect! I can't express how amazing this was |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWW IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW, I hate Cain so much LMAO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I take back what I said in my previous review. I WISH I COULD DELETE IT (don't read it)! This story is actually really growing on me! I really like this! I had been confused with the plot at first but this is very well written (and I really can't stop reading it!) I really like Sasuke's character in this and seeing a more possessive and protective side of him while still maintaining how he would behave canonically! I also love what you did with each chapter title, I love Disney it's so heartwarming and nostalgic reading each of them. I do read author notes I'm sorry to hear that you've received hate on your upload schedule! Any writer should never be pressured to update as soon as possible, that's so rude! Take all the time you need in updating your stories, you are the writer and we are the readers after all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3 chapters in, I'm still unsure how to feel about this story. To me it just seems very unhealthy and toxic, and I feel really bad for Sakura (especially if I were picture myself in her position). I know Sasuke would ever actually try to own Sakura out of the blue and Tsunade and Naruto seemed to brush this off too quickly for their characters. Like what the heck? There's no way Konoha would allow something like this. Of course this is a very unique story concept but I'm just scared wondering if Sakura is able to consent...? All in all the way sasusaku has been portrayed in this story just seems too toxic for me. However no offense to your writing I think the story could use some retouches. Besides I think it's so fast paced to me but I know I might just be a sucker for slow burn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura should have been sold to slavery to a foreign country, so she could weaken the country by having her in their possession. Sakura gives a -10 debuff in everything and a -50 debuff in fighting and luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The boys parents are suspicious |
![]() ![]() ![]() People who loved Sakura are too okay about her being someone's property |