|Reviews for Laying Claim|
| Mythika chapter 3 . 2/24/2013
... hm XD I'm just.. what could sasuke think in these moments she lies in his bed... XD
| renzie17 chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Aaaaaaahhhhh! I loooooved it! 3
Two things, though:
1) I don't know which chapter it was, but you said Sakura had a laptop on her desk... (can't blame you, though. Haha! That was from, like, five or six years ago)
2) There aren't any clubs in the Narutoverse.
Nonetheless, you totally pulled the whole thing off and I absolutely loved it! :
much love from renzie17 x
| Akemi Spangler chapter 5 . 2/18/2013
ok I'm sorry about this but you made a small mistake about the chromosome thingies. Girls have only XX chromosomes while boys have XY chromosomes. So when Sasuke was ranting a little about tolerance for children it should've been "Such tolerance must only come from the x chromosome." not "Such tolerance must only come from the y chromosome." ... wow I sound like a B word... sorry it was gonna bug me if I didn't say it (-_-")
| Bels2 chapter 18 . 2/15/2013
Ainw amo essa fanfic! Você escreveu uma perfeita história, adoro ler a tradução dela *-* Fiz um review em português mesmo porque meu inglês ruim... Mas amo ler ela, acompanho todos os dias para ver os posts e adoro porque agora posso ler no meu idioma! Você escreve muito bem, a fanfic divina! Parabéns pelo magnific trabalho!
| Drawkcab chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Po-po. This first chapter gave me all sorts of plot bunnies. I really like it do go on.:D
| Lazurman chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
| Kazminy chapter 18 . 1/28/2013
I could NOT stop reading this story until I was finished.
It was so well written and developed I actually preferred to lose 3 hours of sleep for it!
| marching red chapter 18 . 1/27/2013
I so thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I'm feeling a bit lost now. Great job!
| MCKC chapter 18 . 1/22/2013
Oh my god! Just an utterly amazing story! I have to admit I had my doubts at first (the beginning summary) but this story blew me away! YOU blew me away, what with your amazing writing and all! :) just a really really great job!
| MidoriDark34 chapter 18 . 1/15/2013
wooow.. your story was just.. SO AWESOME! I loved it I'm going to read your other stories, too :-)
| Kurenai no Chinoumi chapter 18 . 1/14/2013
I absolutely loved this story! It will forever be one of my all time favorites (: You did a great job writing it!
| AnimeFreakmxsflohshchxt chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
i love this
| OrangeKiss chapter 18 . 1/5/2013
The Best. Loved it. :)
| writersblockismystyle135 chapter 18 . 1/4/2013
I just have to say, this story was absolutely amazing! I've read fanfiction for years and this is the very first review I have ever posted but I couldn't just simply not say nothing about this story! It was so creative and the characters fit their original characteristics so well that it was very easy to imagine this story playing in your head like a movie.. haha... not to mention every chapter was named after a Disney song... *Which I happen to be a huge fan of Disney and their music* so extra points won there... ) I also went to look at your other stories to realize I've read most of them and couldn't help but notice on your profile that you like jdramas *I own all of the ones you mentioned except the high school host club one (cuz they're my favs too and just had to tell you, that you should try watching Atashinchi no Danshi if you haven't already)... it has Maki Horikita of Kurosagi, hana kimi, and Nobuta wo produce as the main lead and is really enjoyable to watch... )
| Oro-shadow1 chapter 13 . 1/3/2013
ahhhhhhh! Possessive sasu-temerity been waitin' for him for a while. Yes I have. Also the mini perverted scene was for lack of better words ...woah!