Reviews for The Space Between
T-Bone101 chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
Please update
Lioness Of the fire chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
Omg I love it I wish they would have done the episode this way , way better than what they did but oh well
Psycho Tangerine chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
The writing is excellent. You do a terrific job of adapting that episode and adding your own details to it.
Ghostwriter chapter 5 . 11/3/2010
Ha ha ha ha. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
mainestreet chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
That was an amazing fic, incredibly well written and mushy in the BEST way possible ;) I loved how you made the scenes in the team up even better, I didn't even think it was possible! Plus you have wonderfully creative flair! As Dustin would put it THAT WAS AWESOME, DUDE!
Artemis-chan of Redwing chapter 5 . 5/30/2009
Wow. I just have to say that this was incredibly adorable (and heartbreaking in the right moments). The closing line was perfect, and they was you had these scenes fit in with the episodes was just great. Good job! I'd love to see more from you!

toriblakefan chapter 5 . 9/29/2008
u really have a flair for writing. keep on goin n writin fanfic. i'll continue to give support xD chapter 3 . 5/4/2008
aww! I soo loved this Truly awesome 3

JuseaPeterson chapter 5 . 3/25/2008
Yeah, that was awesome. I hope you write more.

Great job on describing the events and more of the conversations that you don't hear.

I love this story. You did an amazing job. :)
JuseaPeterson chapter 4 . 3/25/2008
I don't know how many times I can say this, but it was amazing.

I love how you had that whole section happen and where Blake, Hunter and Cam went in at. You descibe everything so well and include how you get into a canon scene and out. I love the extended conversation that you had where in the show it cut it off.

Love the Dustin/Marah bit and Tori/Blake.

Great job.
JuseaPeterson chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
Okay seriously it's like this completely fit in with the episode and they just forgot to air these parts. You flow in and out of the conversations on screen so easily, I swear you helped write the script.

I love Hunter's thoughts and why Cam and Hunter didn't go down there. Blake coming and Hunter's thoughts on that and realizing that Blake's thinking about not wanting to fight his wife is really good.

I love these lines:

'Hunter let him be, guessing that when your wife turned evil and went on a rampage a guy needed to collect his thoughts.'


'Later, when they were dangling from a ledge in the Abyss, it occurred to Hunter that in the future, assuming he survived the experience long enough to have a future, he really ought to pay more attention when Blake thought something was a bad idea.'

Anyways, amazing chapter, as usual. Onward to read more. :)
JuseaPeterson chapter 2 . 3/25/2008
Oh my gosh this story is amazing. I mean you have the characters down. I love how you show that they are still living their lives even though Blake is racing, but they still all keep in contact, I really don't like those stories where they never hear from Blake.

Marah and Kapri, you described them and how I see their role after NS just right.

Love that you have Marah/Dustin together. And the bond you talk about with Hunter and Tori, definitely can see that.

I love that you had all this happening right before they get to 'Sensei'. Can't wait to read more.
JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Oh my gosh, I can't believe I that I never saw this until now. I love this. You did such a great job at going through that whole scene from Blake's mind which totally made sense.

I love Jesse and think you did a great job with him.

Also, I love how you have that even though things are crazy for them as ninjas and Blake as a rider they still try and see and he makes it home. And I love that you have them talking on the phone every night. My sister and I could see it happening like that.

Blake and Tori being married, I love that. I love Blake and Tori, so...

Great start, can't wait to read the rest of this story.
Swiftlet in the Cloud chapter 5 . 3/21/2008
Awesome short story! Please write a sequel! Make them appear again in mystic force or operation overdrive or something like that, please. be waiting if you do decide to write a sequel!
xXxJessikaxXx chapter 5 . 9/17/2007
that's really good and so funny! keep it up!
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