Reviews for Barren
LISA MUNN chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
YES I SAW THIS PART OF THE STORY WHAT HAPPENING THERE BECAUSE KIMBERLEY LOVES MICHAEL VERY MUCH THAT HURTS HE HURTS HER I REALLY BAD FOR HER WHAT HE THAT PAIN WHAT HE DID TO HER IS JUST AWFUL THE WAY HE TREAT HER LIKE THAT HE SHOULD TREAT LEARN RESPECT TO TRYING MAKE THINGS WORSE ON HER HE JUST THAT THE WAY HE USING HER HE NOT LIKE THAT KIND OF A IS VERY TWISTED MAKE LIFE WORSE ON HER WHAT HE DOING TO TAKING ALL THE PILLS AND WINE TRY KILLED HERSELF BECAUSE OF HIM SYDENY IS TRYING SAVE HER LIFE AND SHE DID GIVE HER HELP THANK YOU
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
I wish I could sum this story up a little more articulately, but there's only one word that comes to mind: beautiful.

The way you described each moment so perfectly, while still managing to portray such powerful emotion was just amazing.

"All she wanted was to die alone in Malibu"

This line was particularly moving; it summed up the events perfectly and had me close to tears. You got her point of view spot on.

Once again a wonderful story- you have a real talent.
Laura chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Another good one! I love it. Please keep writing so people remember Melrose. I'd do it but I don't have a fanfiction bone in my body!