|Reviews for Failure|
| Terminus Pride chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
I liked it! It was really sad too but still none of the less really well written out! Good job!
| Shima Ame chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
I really like your wording here. The repeated descriptions used made the point clear, but didn't become annoying. It was very well written!
We all hear this story over and over, but not many times do we get such a visual of it, as if we're seeing through Albel's eyes. Great job!
| Illusion Sky chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
It was good. People must do mistakes to learn.
| Miss Nox chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Hiya, great story, I love this scene and you dealt with it so well! Brill story!