Reviews for Cursum Perficio
Gorse chapter 22 . 7/29/2015

It's been years since you updated/finished off this story, but I want you to know that, despite your rant at the end, it was exactly what I needed. Your writing style is really enjoyable, descriptive enough to be vivid but not heavy on purple prose and overwrought sentences. I know you finished this up in 2011, and hopefully you're still active enough on the site to see this, because it's important that people know when they're doing good things.

Fanfiction with dorky references, fanfiction with heavy influences from all the media and stories we consume being completely unashamed of that fact. It's what I grew up on and really took me back to my younger years. The enthusiasm and love you showed for this story over all the years you've plucked away at it is obvious, even though you didn't get to completely finish it. Psychonauts is just one of those games with enough background and enough charm that it seems to get everybody's creative side going, as if it was made to actively encourage fanfiction.

And maybe it was, because it's the closest thing we'll ever get to another game.

So, thank you so much for this story, it made a cold, stormy afternoon that much warmer.
Coraline15 chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
That dream somehow made me think of Silent Hill :O
Avoxia chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
Avoxia chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
Amazing so far! I have just begun reading and I'm already hooked! cant wait to see what adventure this story takes me on. :D
OfTheIronwilled chapter 9 . 1/24/2014
This chapter is actually incredibly interesting to me. One of the many things that made this chapter for me is that, we, as readers, are still no more enlightened as we were before, when you really think about it. There's a very strong chance that everything that the villain is saying is in fact a lie, where there is still an incredibly strong chance that the exact opposite is true - and there is one detail that makes me lean to the former. For all I know it might not mean anything - a detail that is unimportant and was never meant to be anything or one that will play the largest of roles in the story to come - and that is Lilli, and one of the possible reasons she is gagged here. Nereus has said that Raz's memories of the Ferrowbrooks was a complete fake, and an act of repression... but in Raz's 'fake' memory, LILLI WAS THERE. If everything Nereus is saying really is the truth, she would know it.

Or maybe I'm just overanalyzing things. :P I tend to do that a lot. Either way, still a good chapter. Looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Sasami14 chapter 22 . 5/21/2013
ok. after much begging and pleading on your part, i've finally decided to review. i was planning on reviewing at the end anyways. i like reading stories, i love finishing stories, but being inspired by stories after 'The End.' goes beyond love for the art and craft of story telling. i have many inspirations thanks to fellow inspired authors like you. Thank You.
Black Zed chapter 22 . 4/23/2013
goddammit. I liked this story. But hey, I know how it goes. at least you gave a plot summary, something not nearly enough writers who break off stories do.
I would suggest adding a 'dropped' tag or something to the description
RisuQ chapter 17 . 9/25/2012
Wonderfully done. I can resist not reviewing no longer. I'll let you know I've just spent the last 4 hours reading the first 17 chapters. And I have two tests coming up. And an inkling to play Psychonauts once more.

Anyway, The series has been an awesome roller coaster ride of emotions and stuff for me to read. I can't wait to read the last chapters :3
Soharu87 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
this was the most awesome story ive ever read.
Like, my mind exploded three times.
Soharu87 chapter 22 . 8/4/2012
... there is only one thing i can say after reading this.



and i dont usually cuss...
Zarina3908 chapter 22 . 7/5/2012
How is this Kingdom Hearts- esque? I don't remember KH having that much angst . . . and it's cool to abuse elipsis. I do it a lot too. I think that this is really good. Mine is truly terrible, Kingdom Hearts and stupid as all hell. I will most likely take it down ASAP.
Zarina3908 chapter 6 . 7/5/2012
As a tried and true southern girl myself I must inform you that we do not ues y'all when refering to one person. We use y'all when refering to a group. Just a thing.
Zarina chapter 22 . 12/10/2011
A) Kingdom Hearts is not even close to being this angsty. B) Kingdom hearts is freaking awesome! C) You misspelled Vrirta as Vitra.
Zarina chapter 17 . 12/9/2011
Oh my gosh i loled so hard at the teeeveee i just laughed for like 10 min.
Zarina chapter 11 . 12/7/2011
You are a cruel and heartless person to sacifraice all those lives for selifish gains! But nice refrence to old 8bit earthbound-type video games with the psi thing!
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