Reviews for rags to rags
Re chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
If you don't like a pairing, don't write a story about them. Simple, huh? Some people actually like this pairing, y'know, so you don't go around making a fic simply because you hate the pairing. Just leave the pairing alone if you don't like it.
Crystaline-Crimson chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Gyahh! I'm nearly crying. D: You have a real way with writing.

I think I may just go through every single fic of yours that I'll know the fandom of - don't mind me. :3
vincents1lover chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
wa! Why do u hav ta be lik that!*sobs*
Artistic.Tsuna chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Gwah? You dont like the Cloud/Leon pairing? Thats so evil! Though I liked the mini story. . .apart from the end bit. . .Cloud does so love Leon. . .Hes just to shy to admit it. . .
pewpew chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Ouch! Dang, Leon will be feeling that burn for quite a while... Poor guy. (Though he should know better than confessing after such a quick round.)

The writing here felt a little rushed, but had a (surprisingly successful) big impact in the end. Congrats to you for being able to create so much emotion with so few words. Most people drag angst on and on and on with long, windy sentences and thought processes. Drives me nuts sometimes.

And while I can't really imagine Cloud being such an enormous ass (despite his "tough guy" coldness), it works here, I guess. Nice piece.
Whatever chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
This just shows how much of a loser you are if the only reason you wrote this was to be a response.
kokonutsu chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Oh. Cold and cruel, although it's not very obvious that you hate the pairing from the story though. I loved the last line though.
bridges chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Ohmygawd.

Wonderful.

I loved this.

The ending was...

sad. ;_;

Poor Leon. xDD

【FAVED】
organizedcure chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Fuckin' Cloud. Sometimes I want to fucking strangle him for being so goddamn stubborn, but I want to love him so much, he dies at the same time. I make no sense, but you do. I love your second(?) paragraph, But, i gotta go. I'll re-read, then sleep.
kingdomhearts222 chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
Ima use that line to dump some guy...I already had a dream of me in some school and everybody thing I'm a slut...all because this guy loves but hates me...then I end up late to geometry...cause i forgot how to get around in the school cause i'm pissed...thanks archy...You gave me the energy to write my damned dream!
na chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
That was the dumbest, most pointless thing. Why write something you hate for no other reason than to be snarky?
scarlettHuntress chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
cloud is a bitch. well, here anyway. poor leon... he needs a hug, i guess. well, anyway, the fic was cool...
hdf chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
Awesome short piece. Very porny, very to the point. But roti.

Your pairing preference makes me sad. D:
PearADime chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
um...okay, whyd you write it
Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
...At least their somewhat in character. I like Leon/Cloud but they always make Cloud like Sora in some way...And he's really not. The last line was awesome, nice way of putting a guy down.
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