|Reviews for Deserving Of|
| jen chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
very powerful. in the midst of his divorce and all the 'blood and tears' as liv put it in web, he realized how much he loved her, was in love with her, and needed her. excellent oneshot.
| Busty Sinclaire chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
dude. didn't he just vomit? and he's kissing her? oh god, that's wrong in 8 different ways.
I'm sorry. the story was really great and i love it, but all could think at the end was "He just vomited and he's kissing her. Oh God, that's gross."
I'm really sorry.
| Amy chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Really great story-well written. But the entire kiss scene I was thinking, "Ew...he just threw up..."
| Sheyna-osirissystemlady chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
That was absolutely beautifully written! It's a refreshing change from 'Elliot gets mad at Olivia, Olivia gets sad, there are lots of words, they kiss.' In this fic there are no need for an elaborate rant. You've balaned speech and description perfectly and not made this cheesy at all. Brilliant!
| Lisa chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
What terrific, evocative writing. Just had to let you know I think this is powerful stuff!
| drakien chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Gah. Lurve it. Lurve you. Did a good job characterizing that sucking blackness El was experiencing. Heart you forever.
| Beaglicious chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Nice job - always a pleasure to read your works -
| jaed621 chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
wow, I really like this, the descriptions, the sky and the two of them, really beautiful. I hope it's not a oneshot because I just want it to continue. Great job, keep writing.
| KleeNut214 chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Excellent. Adding this to my favorites.
| LivNel4ever chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
LOVE LOVE LOVE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I loved the way you wrote this! is was beautiful..and so-THEM!
| obsessedwithstabler chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
Yes... excellent... Must have the EOness...
| GiggleGloWorm9987 chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
really really well written! i loved it! such a great writer!
| onetreefan chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
yay! that was so good! Very impressive!