|Reviews for Of Shaved Ice Treats, Coins, and Fireworks|
| Anonymous PM3er chapter 3 . 3/10/2009
& in character!
Thank you for that!
I can't believe I'm only the third reviewer.
What I like is that the story retains the cute, happy-go-lucky innocence that is the essence of the Paper Mario games(Besides the use of the word crap :P JK. Even Paper Mario partners aren't perfect :P ) while also delving deeper into the characters' human teenagers' emotions/thoughts. This is a rare&&refreshing combination :) Thanks again for it!
| Teroglahn chapter 2 . 9/1/2006
Pretty good so far. You have got to love the Paper Mario allies, no?
Yes, the characterizations are very accurate and the plot is nice (and funny). Of course, you might want to use dividers to separate Kooper's misadventures and Bombette's scenes.
Otherwise, keep going. Personally, I think you can make a whole story out of this enteraining plot, rather than just three chapters, but to each his own.
| Raykura-Kura chapter 2 . 9/1/2006