Reviews for Beginning of Crystal Tokyo
DarienLovesSerena chapter 12 . 8/9/2016
Beautiful story
pencil benders chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
I love this story
Sailor Rayquaza chapter 12 . 12/26/2011
nice can't wait till the next chater
Carlaisabel chapter 12 . 8/21/2011
i hope you post the next stoy soon
SerenaDarienforeverJune30 chapter 12 . 6/15/2010
This is one of my favorites.
Sailor Meirue chapter 12 . 5/30/2010
Neo queen Serenity-san our story was amazing when start getting my stories up maybe you'll like mine caust mine is about Chibiusa and Heliose's daughter Meirue
Itachi's-Daughter chapter 12 . 3/31/2010
I loved the story
princessly love chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
its amazing but maybe you should the writing style maybe you did in chapter 2 but im commenting onj chapter 1
OracleGoddessOfDelphi chapter 12 . 3/9/2010
Please, either update the story or write a sequel as this was so romantic
dekita chapter 5 . 3/5/2010
Interesting! I love continuation stories! And this just happens to be my favorite part of SM... I only skimmed through the story, but so far it looks really good! The punctuation & grammar needs editing (such as quoting what people say) but it looks good. Will read&review the chapters when I get to reading it. Also glad you finished the story!
chimichurri chapter 10 . 12/18/2009
Wonderful story! I like your idea though there were some grammatical errors and typos but I didn't mind that. Please keep writing )
lightofastar chapter 10 . 11/15/2008
I love your story. I can't wait to read the reset of it.
Trosario chapter 10 . 8/23/2008
This story goes under my skin its just totaly amazing

I just miss that in the new mellenuim Mars has to "hold her tongue" lol I miss how it was between them befor the freeze came but still I have to say my fav. SM story it's like SM contiunes in your story after epsiode 200 very well writhen I can't wait for more and I hope there will be
Trosario chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
GOSH this is the ebst story I ever read in my life

I can't get enought I go and read the rest now

totaly amazing thank you for writhing it
Camyrn chapter 10 . 8/5/2008
I love your story! And whos writing and grammar is perect? Everyone makes mistakes,if you know what you are trying to say then who cares if others make fun of you at least your friends and family understand and that is all that counts.
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