Reviews for The Unicorn Spirit
thisisasecretnow chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
That was beautiful. Not a single forced line - VERY nice job.


-The Stupid Crazy Insane Idiotic Weirdo known as Tassel630

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FlatlinedGamer chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
That was so awsome!
Black-Wolf-Warrior chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
That was very poetic!

It was like one big prophecy!

Are you going to write more?
horsefeathers75 chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Lovely poem. The rhymes are nicely done, and I agree, the last few lines have to be my favourite part. Well done! :)
Asmodeus1389 chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Very well done, nice meter and rhyme. Especially fond of those last two lines.