Reviews for Fifty Nine Moves
Skittles116 chapter 1 . 5/22/2022
Absolutely love this. And this pairing. This was awesome and so worth the read. Thank you for writing it
sheepmasterx chapter 1 . 12/15/2021
hot damn that was excellent
CumberBiscuit02 chapter 1 . 10/29/2021
Coookie chapter 1 . 5/19/2021
Sweet! Love the one shot on your take of their relationship from beginning to end.
bashfulbabe02 chapter 1 . 3/29/2021
I liked this story!
Udle chapter 1 . 8/30/2020
I love Temari and Shikamaru. This was a lovely 3rd person piece. Thank you!
loknnica chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
This was such a lovely story, I really enjoyed reading it! Your style flows do well and your characterization was on point. Great work, thank you for writing!
BloodyP xD chapter 1 . 1/2/2020
That was very sweet, this couple is one of my favorites. I congratulate you!
ShadowWind922 chapter 1 . 4/5/2019
it was good
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2019
12/10 loved it
donutlovestea chapter 1 . 7/22/2018
Oh my heart. Thank you for creating this. One of the best shikatema oneshots out there
SkyeWhite chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
This fic is perfect. Really really amazing. I love your writing style. I LOVE THE CHECKMATE SCENE. Your fic makes me want to learn shogi. I can't believe this is your first ShikaTema fic. It feels like you've been writing them for so long. Good stuff. Do more.
ladyg228 chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
this was so cute! loved it
SoulOfAFangirl684 chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Good lord, this is beautiful. I'm almost afraid of writing the review right now, for fear of not being able to adequately sum up my thoughts and give you the praise you deserve. Personally, I love this writing style, and I think you did a great job with it; you certainly surprised me saying it was your first time!

This was just fabulous. You kept them both so in character. It's been a long time since I've been overcome by... 'feels' as we say these days, (I may be a fangirl, but I'm not huge on romance and like to think I'm not that easily impressed) but that little scene at the end, with Shikamaru's silent proposal over a regular game of shoji, really got me. As well as the early scenes with Temari. You just characterize her so well and give a great insight into why she was so standoffish to him especially. I mean, to an extent she just IS that way, but I could also see her never quite getting over being outsmarted. Especially when he comes across as being so young at that point.

I think that's the best you're (I'm) gonna get at this point. Just know that I loved this and will most certainly be returning to reread it in the future. Favorites button, work your magic!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
This has got to be one of the best ShikaTema stories I've read! That proposal was so good ️️️
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