Reviews for Fifty Nine Moves
Jiben-Zitro chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Nice and sweet. A few spelling errors, but as a whole, it definitely rates a top score. Nothing wrong with the style, and in fact is a nice way to deliver a story revolving around two polar opposite characters, especially for these two. Good Work!
PsychoLeopard chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Aw, cute. Love it. The style does well for the pairing, I think. Good work.
StarfireFowl chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Very clever. Good story.
Mirakuru Rein chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
_ Very cute! I loved the idea of using the shougi game as a basis for the relationship, and I love how you had the relationship develop at a good pace. Keep up the good work!
Crystal Jaganshi chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
This was really really good. I like the way you described everything.
naash chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
wow...i like i love it. that was extreemely good. i can not explain why though i tried typing it and it came out all wrong..all i could say that i'm proud of it and you shpould be too
Misa chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
This was wonderful! :D Shikamaru and Temari are my favorite couple in Naruto, and this was such a perfect representation of them. I hope to see more fics from you :D
ShikaTemFan chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
This fic is beautiful as hell and you captured both character's personalities quite wonderfully.
aznelemants chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
that was awesome! i loved it. Although, you should change the genre to something else. It didnt seem that angsty to me at all, more of a general/romance thingy. I hope you write more stories!
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