| Reviews for Fifty Nine Moves |
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   Jiben-Zitro chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 Nice and sweet. A few spelling errors, but as a whole, it definitely rates a top score. Nothing wrong with the style, and in fact is a nice way to deliver a story revolving around two polar opposite characters, especially for these two. Good Work! |
| PsychoLeopard chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 Aw, cute. Love it. The style does well for the pairing, I think. Good work. |
| StarfireFowl chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 Very clever. Good story. |
| Mirakuru Rein chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 _ Very cute! I loved the idea of using the shougi game as a basis for the relationship, and I love how you had the relationship develop at a good pace. Keep up the good work! |
| Crystal Jaganshi chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 This was really really good. I like the way you described everything. |
| naash chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 wow...i like it...no... i love it. that was extreemely good. i can not explain why though i tried typing it and it came out all wrong..all i could say that i'm proud of it and you shpould be too |
| Misa chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 This was wonderful! :D Shikamaru and Temari are my favorite couple in Naruto, and this was such a perfect representation of them. I hope to see more fics from you :D |
| ShikaTemFan chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 This fic is beautiful as hell and you captured both character's personalities quite wonderfully. |
| aznelemants chapter 1 . 9/1/2006 that was awesome! i loved it. Although, you should change the genre to something else. It didnt seem that angsty to me at all, more of a general/romance thingy. I hope you write more stories! |