Reviews for Unrequited Love? Not So Much
Anna Tramell Review 2 chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
You know when you reread a fic after a few years and just want to review it all over again? Well... here goes XD

I really liked the nickname "Pads" and the little bit toward the end ("Padfoot, you just kissed me!" - "I know" - "Do it again.")

A quick correction: Rosaline in Romeo and Juilet didn't love Romeo back, not the other way around. She actually told him she was going to be a nub - but the mistake didn't matter.

I was going through all my old favourites and decided whether I still wanted them - cleaning up what I didn't. This definitely passed my little test - Thankies for your wonderful fanfiction! It brightens my day!
dzio chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Not very original, but cute enough, so it doesn't really matter. I like the dialogue-only one-shots. :)

Oh, but there's something wrong here:

“At the beginning of this book, Romeo’s in love with another girl, Rosaline.”


“It’s unrequited. He doesn’t love her back.”

So he's in love with her, but he doesn't love her back? Which is it? ;)
MoonyPadfoot4ever chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
"Padfoot, you just kissed me."

"I know."

"Do it again."


(yeah, i know, i'm a psycho.)
Cuban Sombrero Gal chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
If I could write that well at one in the morning I'd be happ! Well done!
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
"a fluffy, slashy, dialogue-y mood" LOL Most of us know your pain! It was okay. My fave part was:

“Padfoot, you just kissed me.”

“I know.”

“Do it again.”
runningfingers chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
aw. so sweet! I must now go read the other stuff that you have written!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
..n- nice... *breaks off laughing hysterically* Nice, nice, nice!
Perle chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
I adore this story!

Just short, but says so much.. and it's written so..

Ah, how romantic! XD Oh I love it! Thanks for this story!
Calenmarwen chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
That was really good, very cute!
sdove05 chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
0_o...that say the least...o_0
siri-poo chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
wow, i never thought of sirius and remus being gay 4 each other until now... weird

*pauses to think of situation*

o god, bad mental image *smacks self upside head*
EmilyMars chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
this was cute, I like it
Toast and Stitch chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Contrary to what you think, I enjoyed this, lol. Especially this part:

“Padfoot, you just kissed me.”

“I know.”

“Do it again.”


I like SBRL oneshots a lot.

This one was just a little confusing, but because I got thrown off with the:



And i had to think, all right, whose talking. O I had to think. OW. lol. No wonder i got confused...

I also like dialogue ones. So awesome!
ClementineBlack chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
Good this story is fluff mainia! im grinning like an idiot on drugs! only one word can express my true feelings...WOP!
Angel Of Noctem chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
Fluffy, slashy, dilouge-y mood! That's great, because I love this story! :)
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