Reviews for You Shouldn't Have
HGDam chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Holy crap that was amazing. I do wish it was onger, because it has so much potential to be a great long fic, but it is still amazing as it it:)
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Oh, that's so sweet! Fantastic work. I'm glad to see more of this ship!
aikakone chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
It's nice to see R/G still being written. Good summary because this was a short fic and the reader knows it. I also agree wtih yoru last reviewer that Ginny talking about herself "Ginny and I" in the letter doesn't make sense, but that is easily fixed. I also appreciate that sense of long to be with the one a person loves but unable to do so.
SpeakForTheTrees chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Aww, you're right! That is a sad little ficlet. I really love the ending. "You shouldn't have, Gin. You shouldn't have." You're a good writer. I'd like to read something longer from you. The only problem I see with it is in the letter, it says "some good muggle movies Ginny and I tested out", but the letter is from Ginny. Who were you talking about? Some of your grammar's a bit off, too, but that's easily fixed. If you want me to correct it for you really fast, I'd be glad to. Just email me.