Reviews for Black Lightning: Legend of the Kurodenkou
Smartyul chapter 12 . 6/16
The fuck. You can't end it here, I loved this story.
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 12 . 1/18
Ik I was going to read the last chapter before saying anything or requesting an update or something but why the hell did you jump from 1 story point to another like that. I was completely lost at the start of this chapter.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/24/2019
Snoop dog the new highkage
Phobrouis1 chapter 1 . 10/9/2019
After reading the first five chapters, I just... I just can’t continue. Don’t get me wrong, you have an, okay, plot going for it. But I feel that some interactions between the characters are extremely forced, or just happen so quickly I can’t even figure out what their conversation was about unless I read it twice, thrice even.

But, onto my one biggest issue. WHAT THE HELL KIND OF SHINOBI - SHINOBI! - VILLAGE JUST ALLOWS TWO COMPLETELY UNKNOWN(S) INTO THEIR VILLAGE WITHOUT ANY SORT OF BACKGROUND CHECKS! Jeez, had to get that out of the way. But seriously, if that was the case for every random shinobi asking for clearance then Konoha would be infested with enemy spies.

Well, that’s all from me I guess. See you!
Yatakashi chapter 4 . 7/7/2017
96 upside down is 96 my guy
football78 chapter 1 . 4/14/2017
hey man this is complete bullshit
The Third Son chapter 6 . 2/29/2016
This chapter seems pretty stupid, as did the last one. Oh dont get me wrong, I like your way of writing, but seriously, the reactions are waaaaaaaay off from where they should be. You should put a big sign in the description saying "OOC Behavior". Why? Because in the last chapter, you show Sasuke AGREEING to work and not outright kill someone who he knows is affiliated with Itachi without any former explanation as to why... WTF?

Two, in this chapter, Jiraiya believes that Naruto is "Naruto" without any proof. I'm surprised he doesn't kill the guy after learning he's akatsuki. Oh and Naruto has no sense of secrecy, like WTF?

That is all... for now.
Waaaaaassup chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
Good for not making this a yaoi story, you have my many thanks
Guest chapter 4 . 8/14/2015
bijuu does not mean demon it means tailed beast hense how they are named by the shinobi ichibi - one tail nibi - two tails sanbi - three tails
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 2/27/2015
1 week later…
-Flashback-

"Alright, Naruto. Here are the mission specs. You are to enter Konoha and steal their Scroll of Secrets." Itachi explained.

... -_-'

...You started a time skip...with a flashback...

...OK then...
Guest chapter 12 . 2/23/2015
I like this story, but some of the chapter transitions seem to skip thing that seem like they would be important, such as chapter 11 ending with naruto meeting another uzumaki, and chapter 12 being a war. I may be missing something, but it makes no sense to me. Also update at some point please, I don't have much hope as its been 7 years, but pleeaaase, pretty pleeeeeaaaaaaaaasse?!
CartelHate chapter 12 . 8/23/2014
WHY DID YOU NOT CONTINUE HURRY UP I WANT MORE BEAUTIFUL FF?!
The Fox Sage chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Bijuu means tailed beast
acetwolf94 chapter 10 . 6/26/2014
NICE!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
This is also a story I will never forget for it is the second story that I have ever read. This story brings back pleasant memories and I must thank you, the author. This brings me to tears just thinking about back then. How I've come so far...
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