Reviews for Black Lightning: Legend of the Kurodenkou
The Third Son chapter 6 . 2/29
This chapter seems pretty stupid, as did the last one. Oh dont get me wrong, I like your way of writing, but seriously, the reactions are waaaaaaaay off from where they should be. You should put a big sign in the description saying "OOC Behavior". Why? Because in the last chapter, you show Sasuke AGREEING to work and not outright kill someone who he knows is affiliated with Itachi without any former explanation as to why... WTF?

Two, in this chapter, Jiraiya believes that Naruto is "Naruto" without any proof. I'm surprised he doesn't kill the guy after learning he's akatsuki. Oh and Naruto has no sense of secrecy, like WTF?

That is all... for now.
Waaaaaassup chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
Good for not making this a yaoi story, you have my many thanks
Guest chapter 4 . 8/14/2015
bijuu does not mean demon it means tailed beast hense how they are named by the shinobi ichibi - one tail nibi - two tails sanbi - three tails
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 2/27/2015
1 week later…
-Flashback-

"Alright, Naruto. Here are the mission specs. You are to enter Konoha and steal their Scroll of Secrets." Itachi explained.

... -_-'

...You started a time skip...with a flashback...

...OK then...
Guest chapter 12 . 2/23/2015
I like this story, but some of the chapter transitions seem to skip thing that seem like they would be important, such as chapter 11 ending with naruto meeting another uzumaki, and chapter 12 being a war. I may be missing something, but it makes no sense to me. Also update at some point please, I don't have much hope as its been 7 years, but pleeaaase, pretty pleeeeeaaaaaaaaasse?!
CartelHate chapter 12 . 8/23/2014
WHY DID YOU NOT CONTINUE HURRY UP I WANT MORE BEAUTIFUL FF?!
The Fox Sage chapter 2 . 7/22/2014
Bijuu means tailed beast
acetwolf94 chapter 10 . 6/26/2014
NICE!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
This is also a story I will never forget for it is the second story that I have ever read. This story brings back pleasant memories and I must thank you, the author. This brings me to tears just thinking about back then. How I've come so far...
neon7369 chapter 12 . 11/27/2013
Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!
SkyRage chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Uh, "bijuu" translates to "tailed beast" not "demon".
hidanakasuna chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
or aniki :3 for older brother
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
I hate his personlaity too snilar to Canon...

loud, obnoxious and why am I not surprised he is addicted to raman and is obnoious Loud?

Plus had a unrequited crush AGAIN!
Phoenix185 chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
lol refs? like Unstoppable! Amazing! Godlike
Phoenix185 chapter 7 . 5/11/2013
Yondaime Hokage, whose name was Kazama Arashi" ummmm that isnt the forths name the forths name is Minato namikaze not Kazama arashi that is just a "fluke" so please fix that and same with the bijuu deing demon it means tailed beast so fix it damn it and it is minato because one it says that from the start of the anime and only said arashi once in the manga so again plz fix it!
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