Reviews for Trump Card
TheMistOfThePast chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
You just solved the entire case, you just revolutionized the entire history of police training! I mean all these years at the academy, studying human character, psyche of the terrorist, fingerprint analysis, all the courses I've taken in surveillance, hostage negotiation and criminal psychology. I mean all I had to do was just drive around the neighborhood and point my finger at a house and say "DA BAD GUYS ARE IN DERE!"

Aha soz couldn't resist saying this quote aha great story
TheMistOfThePast chapter 7 . 3/5/2012
aaawwww this was sweet! edo freaking out was adorable!
Harryswoman chapter 7 . 10/16/2006
this was really great! keep up the good work and write more fanfictions!
KTRose chapter 7 . 10/15/2006
Meh- so Bradley didn't die. He deserves to, but I think I can wait.

What he did was evil. Evil, evil, evil!

I do like the end, though. It reminds me of a song that I like...

Good job, and I hope to read more from you soon!
phantom4angel chapter 7 . 10/15/2006
good story!

~Angel~
phantom4angel chapter 6 . 10/15/2006
ARG! Gotta read more...

~Angel~
phantom4angel chapter 5 . 10/15/2006
DID HE FIND HER?

~Angel~
phantom4angel chapter 4 . 10/15/2006
long chapters are always welcomed

~Angel~
phantom4angel chapter 3 . 10/15/2006
OH this is my favorite chapter so far because Ed's actually being human and not acting like it.

~Angel~
phantom4angel chapter 2 . 10/15/2006
I think you wrote Mustang very well, and Ed is very well done as well.

Wow that's a lot of wells...

~Angel~
phantom4angel chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
OH intriguing, must continue.

~Angel~
S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 7 . 10/13/2006
I'm delightfully disturbed by this story, in so many ways. Love how you have to think about the ending (oy, thinking in FANFIC? What is the world coming to?).
JoojooBrother chapter 7 . 10/13/2006
Awesome ending. Thank you! You're favorited on Joe's list for sure.

However, Joe must give constructive criticism. She believes that it should have a bit more of a plot, but doesn't really mind on the whole.
Yellow Mask chapter 7 . 10/13/2006
This is a really good ending to a marvellous fic. Wrath's smugness is just so typical of him, and I really like the ending line. Finishes it nicely, I think :)
kitten robot chapter 7 . 10/13/2006
Ah, good last chapter! Thanks for writing such a neat story ) Its been a pleasure to read!

Gabunny
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