|Reviews for Just One Chance|
| Zenthisoror chapter 20 . 10/29/2013
My goodness! A believable trio of friends, humour, action, a believable siege on Konoha, redemption, closure, real suspense and shock and so much more! I had such a wonderful time reading this story I don't even know where to start. You say you're not so confident at writing fighting scenes? False modesty. They were understated, clean and efficient and I think you should be really proud. If I could write anything half so well-rounded, I would be a happy writer. Thank you for this, and I hope you're still writing. :)
| mangachick1 chapter 20 . 1/25/2012
I absolutly LOVE how you describe Sasuke! This whole story was beautiful, easily understood and well written! you really gave be a new perspective on Sasuke and i enjoyed that immensly so...keep up the good work!
| scryoko chapter 20 . 12/11/2011
Oh, I really enjoyed that fic. The plot was great and the characters were wonderfully portrayed as well. Not to mention, the fic was exceptionally well-written (for which I am glad). Thank you for sharing.
| Spencey chapter 20 . 11/28/2011
This story was simply brilliant :) I really enjoyed the fight between Sasuke and Orochimaru all through the story, and the role Naruto had in it. Your plot was really well imagined!
| Illadaran chapter 20 . 5/30/2011
I was kinda hoping that this story would focus more on a full out war, but it was still interesting.
| Lang Noi chapter 12 . 5/3/2011
I'm absolutely sure that I've read at least part of this story before.
Well, one way or another, I'm glad it's shown us what happened to Kabuto and the bonds between Team Seven reforging. Thank you for that.
| linn152 chapter 20 . 4/8/2011
Aww, you're not gonna stick with this fandom? :( I had fingers crossed for a sequel, though I get why you're disgruntled with the manga. ." May I just highlight that many of your readers probably wouldn't mind a bit of AU, and still have my fingers crossed? :P
Anywho, great epilogue and conclusion to a great fic. :) This is one of the first Naruto fics I ever read when I found it in 3 yrs ago. Still my favourite and believe it closest to brilliance you could get.
P.S. I've just realised I've never left a proper signed review before...but you know I love you ;)
| EditorFin chapter 20 . 4/3/2011
Love the story i was really disapointed when i saw the update date and realised you probably havent thought of a sequel yet. Please write a sequel they are basically the next sannin and you are such a good writer, you could come up with a good storyline with ease. If you dont i will cry. :(
| Cainchan chapter 20 . 4/3/2011
This story was really wonderful. I enjoyed it much more as the current manga events. and despite you think it would be pointless to post a sequel, I do not think so. Even if it is not canon and an alternative universe, I would love to read a sequel. I adore your writing skills and so I and I think also many other readers would appriciate it, if you would post the sequel. thank you for this story. really. :-)
| Rise Against713 chapter 20 . 4/2/2011
great end to a great story. And i totally get why you're disappointed with the manga. It is getting pretty ridiculous but i still can't stop reading you know?
anyway fantastic story.
| Izolda chapter 20 . 4/2/2011
Aww such a wonderful ending:) Thanks for writing!
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 20 . 4/2/2011
Ow! Don't stop writing fics please! Even if Naruto (manga) sucks now, it has a lot to be salvaged!
Well, anyways, thanks for the story, I didn't like the last chapter (it was kind of a union of obvious facts), though I like Sasuke teaching kids and a learning village.
I really hope you get another fandom to write about again (or recuperate the old ones)
PS: If it doesn't make much sense, it's because I'm a bit sick and feverish... sorry.
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 19 . 3/8/2011
I love happy endings too! Thank you for the fic!
I think there were three things I didn't like: It was a bit slow (you almost lost me three times); The re-apparition of Orochimaru and Kabuto (Though I know it was necessary, so I don't really care); How the Mizukage reacted (It wasn't really Kage like).
I like how the end feels lighter! And for how your Sasuke acted in front of kids, now I want to see him as a teacher (Though the village wouldn't let him get near the children).
Again, thank you for the story. It was good and interesting (And with more sense that the manga, even if lately the manga doesn't have much sense...)
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 10 . 3/6/2011
I find your Lee very interesting. basically because he's a bit OOC, but you do him as he would be once he grows up (I think and hope his Gai-clone thing is a phase... He can worship his teacher in other ways)
Now that I won't forget this, I continue reading
| Cainchan chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
hey my favourite naruto autor at the moment. :-)
thank you for your kind message, I tried to send you a private message but not let my at the moment, so I post this on the comment section. I hope you do not mind. I am glad that your stories are most gen really and I am looking forward to the epilogue... and I really wish that you will write a sequel to this, or another naruto story. You are a such a great writer with fantastic writing skills and there are only a few good writers out there in the naruto fandom, so it would be a waste of talent if you will not write another story or a sequel... :-)There are also other readers who would like to read another story about sasuke writen by you, I think. They are only to lazy to comment. :-)
p.s.: sorry for my bad english in the reviews - english is only my second language ...:-(