|Reviews for Moon Song|
| Fang44 chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
i love this story please update soon :)
| nickybluejess chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
Oh please update this story. It is very good and I am dying to know what is going to happen next.
Please, pretty please. _
| Chichiforever chapter 15 . 9/9/2011
| isame chapter 14 . 6/29/2011
Sorry, it's me again. I just realized that they did not post my email, so PLEASE message me. I would absolutly LOVE to work on this with you. I will be out of town from the 6th of July untill the 11th, so if you do message me, sorry for the late reply. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let me work on this with you! This story makes me excited and I want more people to enjoy it. Keep in mind, I don't want to change the story any, just fix the mistakes and clear up some confusion. Thank you again for your time and please message me soon. Please message me even if you decline my help. Thanks again ~Isame
| isame chapter 15 . 6/29/2011
I LOVE the concept. I really do like this story, but there are alot of problems with it. For one, why is this rated M? I have found nothing M worthy. This is not for children, but it is not M. Next, you really need a proof-reader. There are some VERY confusing sentances and He said/she saids. I do like this story, though you have changed the characters very much, but it is almost impossible to read. I understand typos, but there are many more problems than just typos. Use of quotation marks, commas, clear sentances and a timeline. It also swiches from Dariens point of view to Serena's point of view to I's and it is very confusing. Also in your header, you say "I don't won Sailor Moon." This isn't a big issue, but it is at the beginning of every chapter and if you read it before posting it you would realize this simple mistake. Sorry, it bothers me every time I see it, but I am a little OCD on occasion. If you need a proof-reader, I would be overjoyed to read it for you and correct the problems I see and email it back to you before you post it. If you want, I will even go back, reread and correct the last 15 chapters too. On the flip side, I love the concept. That is why I have stuck to it and read through the confusion. Also, I have a few questions that could help the story flesh out and make it less confusing. I would REALLY like to work with you on this and if you are interested you can message me on here(if they do messaging) or email me at . By the way, I'm Beth. Thank you for the story and I REALLY hope you would like to work with me on this. Thank you for your time, and please update soon! ~Isame
| QuickStar chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
So where to start... lemme see oh well
I was glancing through the stories and your summary caught my attention and then I find myself thinking, reminds me of Hawksong. Sure enough I open it and whala its base on hawksong xD ain't that something?
Its a good start I'll say I notice some grammar errors ... but meh I make those all the time. Good Writting
| Grumpy DelSan13 chapter 15 . 6/28/2011
oh i really like this story please update soooooon good job
| ragirl chapter 15 . 6/27/2011
so far i really love your interesting. normally endy is cold and has no you gave serenity this character is a real soon
| dori-tori chapter 15 . 6/27/2011
Cant wait for more. Pls update asap.
| Erin chapter 15 . 6/27/2011
wonderful story so far; please add more soon! Your descriptions and plot line is fantastic! Please update soon!
| princess chapter 15 . 6/27/2011
i really like your story!keep writing
| KagYasha4ever chapter 15 . 6/26/2011
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA! I am so glad you updated. I am absolutely enamored with this story. It's the definition of fabulous. Thanks for the insight into both Darien and Serena. Of course, it was clear that she was growing attached to the life within her, but this chapter was a clear reminder that Darien is dedicated not only to the child in the womb but the woman carrying it. Please update ASAP. BRAVO!
| Pamela chapter 15 . 6/26/2011
But the baby is not hers right? It was Dariens and some other womans right? Please don't take that long to update again! This story is amazing!
| CharmedSerenity3 chapter 15 . 6/26/2011
ooh, its getting interesting, update soon!
| lylyevans chapter 15 . 6/26/2011
oh thank god she is alright!she will wake up soon right?please continue