Reviews for Only Time
SG-Fan-Forever chapter 8 . 6/26/2009
great story thought I'm really so confused I feel there are the things missing and I think you should do a blog like you said here on top of this chapter and maybe put a link up thx
SG-Fan-Forever chapter 7 . 6/26/2009
why did bella leave Edward?
SG-Fan-Forever chapter 6 . 6/26/2009
{"Rory says its sunny outside, but to the west there are some clouds. It’ll take about twenty minutes till they cover the sun.”

“Okay, I’ll fix that.” Bella replied to him and then turned to me, “watch this,” was all she closed her eyes for a brief second, smiled and turned to Mason. On her face was an exact replica of the look that Rory had given to her a moment ago.}

I don't understand does bella have a power to control the weather? and what was the 3 dollars for
SG-Fan-Forever chapter 3 . 6/26/2009
could you please explain to me all there relations I'm a little confused oh and I got the joke but after I read it for the third time lol
SG-Fan-Forever chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
wow I like the story I wonder if bella is mortal or immortal please tell me thx
SG-Fan-Forever chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Are they twins or triplets? And is Christoper a vamp ? since he will stay up for 2 days oh and is bella a vamp too? has she aged in this story or is she the same
Jasper-Hale-Cullen-Lover chapter 8 . 5/13/2009
Okay, I Am Confused. Is Bella A Vampire? ?
Jasper-Hale-Cullen-Lover chapter 4 . 5/13/2009
Omg! this is cute!
Elani204 chapter 9 . 8/12/2008
i really like the story, so think really hard if u really want to delete it, i mean i've tried to wright and well look i'm the worst, hope something really dramatic happens

FullMetal Alchemistress chapter 8 . 1/4/2008
Very well written, but, no offense though, but it's not exactly the most thought out story line.

1. Rory just met her 'father' and she's looking for comfort in him, wouldn't she shy away from him?

2. Vampires can't have children, thoug I'm writing a story where Bella and Edward have a daughter. But, wouldn't Edward be a little...taken back by the idea of suddenly being the father of 15 year old twins (who were in the hospital because of a fight...?)

3. If Bella ran away, I'm not exactly sure she'd welcome him back so easily, nor he accept her so easily. A lot of explaining would be required.

Please don't take his as a flame. Those were just some of the major things that confused me.
Captain of L'Emeraude chapter 8 . 12/31/2007
I love this story! Sorry I didn't review the middle chappies! Forgive me?

Please continue! I wanna know what happens!


P.S. Why was Esme about to make cookies? I thought they didn't eat! Oh well, I like it anyway.
lasting illusion chapter 7 . 12/8/2007
Hey I couldn't review on chapter 8 because I already reviewed it the first time I read this story months ago.

I really like this story and I was wondering if you are going to update it? That would be soo awesome! I hope you do, but maybe you forgot about it?

Ok so ya that's all I wanted to say.

Love it and hope you update :)
kotaxvampire chapter 8 . 10/28/2007
i love this story it is amazing Mason just sounds so adorable you can't even stand it and are they half vamps? O and is Bella a full vampire now?
lovely death upon us chapter 8 . 8/6/2007
Aw! The end of that last chapter was so sweet, that I almost cried. I really hope that Rory, Mason, and Edward end up having a good relationship with each other!

lasting illusion chapter 8 . 8/6/2007
Aw I love this story soo much. I love how weird Rory is, she's hilarious...the whole thinking about her sandwich, when she was just told that Edward was her father. I also love how accepting she is of him, a nice father daughter moment at the end there...anyways please update really soon...thanks so much for writing this story...I think it's definitely one of the top 'Bella has kids' stories out there!
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