|Reviews for One Foot In|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/10
I have found two other fanfics who copied your idea, some of the lines even being the same. Though I can't see the stats I'm assuming that it did really well because it clearly influenced quite a few people. Also, this was written before their fanfics were, so it seems highly probable.
| Neko-chan chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
If only Ed died and Mustang somehow found footage of what happened
| Ender The Time Lady chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I absoloultely fucking love you. This is brilliant, really, it is. Niceto see a fic that keeps everyone at what I imagin to be IC, eved for Ed. I like to think that's how he acts when he's just so completely fucking done.
Anyways, epic fic! Loved the whole thing!
| Victorious-Mind chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Omg! I loved it so much! Though I would have liked it if Mustang and the others would have found out about it...
| Denna Tejat chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I am impressed. Envy was just so in character, and it was really good described. The idea was awesome, and the fic actually gave me the shivers while I was reading it. You truly are talented, and I hope you make some sort of a sequel. I would gladly read it. :)
| compa16 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Please make a sequel
| Tabbyprincess chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
That was cool...Nice job. Good grammar and spelling and all. Very nice.
| Stormy1x2 chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
*blinksblinks* Holy HELL. I take back what I said on LJ - you ARE twisted. :D And I *love* it!
Envy was just so believable and Ed admitting his fear was like a releasing your breath after holding it while reading the whole thing. Beautiful details and my heart hurts for Envy knowing this was not an original idea. Awesome stuff, EFW, just awesome!
| fullmetaluchia0006 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
this was amazing. I go goosebumps and the tension was incredible. The characters were so accurate and im still thrilled by it *_*
| Illa Scriptor chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
That was beautifully horrific.
So in-character, and frightening, and realistic, and well-written... and the last bit, the hint of Envy's past... dang. Well done.
| Pensulliwen chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Hah, that was hilarious! Great fic, it's always wonderful to see a story with a sadistic, in-character Envy after scrolling past endless sumaries proclaiming "FLUFFY INCEST RAPE" X_X Reading this was worth what I went through to find it, and I cannot think of a higher compliment to bestow upon you.
| SakuraCa chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
I really liked the ending. I didn't see that coming.
| XxHunter The One and OnlyxX chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Heh. I love this story truly i do. This is the 2nd time i've read it. But this tme i decided not to be lazy. I loved the ending it pretty much is epic win. The way the story progressed kept you hooked. All in all great story. Sorry my reviews so bla...im tired but its late wtf is wrong with me.
| The Spirit Realm chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Wow...this is really good. And Envy's so evil XD but he still rocks.
| ohgoditsbriony chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Woah. Envy, you sadistic monster, you. D
How do you write like that? It's so awesome! X3
If I could write like that, seriously, I'd start writing my own stuff. And become famous and all...
...Or I could just kidnap you and force you to write for me. XD