|Reviews for Alanza: Sequel to Backslide: Part I|
| NightChild chapter 102 . 12/21/2001
finally finished! phew!
Oh my god! that was such a complex and fascinating story. And so long! When i first saw the 102 chapters i thought it must have been a computer typo! About the length of a good novel!
But onto the story, everything was so carefully perfected! i loved every minute of it and you pay so much attention to detail. The way you weave a story together...I mean.. including September 11th? Et tu Brute? Classic stuff... Well i'm now off to read part II.. is it going to be as long? I must say that this story must have been so carefully scripted and it certainly paid off! Keep up the good work cos my dear, you are obviously a writer ! :)
| NightChild chapter 56 . 12/21/2001
oh my god...!
This is so funny..
yes its me again...
this story just gets better and better...
but one thing.. i can tell you were pulling for an X-5 reunion.. :)
Isn't a coincedence that Max, Jace's kid got with Case, Charlie and Tinga's kid, and theres James.. which sounds like Lydeckors kid... hehe
And Krit, Syl and Brin are all in the same town?
hehe.. too good to be true.. but love it all the same
| NightChild chapter 35 . 12/21/2001
hey, is it just me? Or is Chapter 34 and 35 the same?
Sorry if its just me.. but wanted to give you the heads up...
love your writing.. :)
| NightChild chapter 2 . 12/21/2001
hehe! i'm only up to chapter too...
but i got to the part with the fuzz and the full blown cat coat? Too funny!
Flying abilities... kewl
ahem.. now i'll continue reading... :)
The whole telekinesis thing reminds me of Charmed
| Catie chapter 1 . 12/1/2001
okay,i havent read it yet,just cause i cant deal with that many chapters in one micht want to split it up into two or three stories instead.
| aegean chapter 60 . 11/25/2001
That was pretty intense. I like the way you've established the relationships.
| katlyn duncan chapter 28 . 9/1/2001
nice.i liked the first one there going to be more to this one?
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/30/2001
I've finally had a chance to catch up on this story since 's been back up, it's great! Really reall great, I hope there's more!
| New York Hope chapter 1 . 8/21/2001
next chapter soon!
| Melissa chapter 27 . 7/24/2001
| moonchick chapter 25 . 7/20/2001
Oooh! I've found this story again and I'm still hooked. Where have they met before? More please!
| Stephanie18 chapter 25 . 7/18/2001
Dun dun dun! Have they met before? I would love to know. I'm intrigued by this story...in fact, I love it! Continue whenever you can...which is hopefully soon. I want to see what happens! )
| aegean chapter 25 . 7/18/2001
Ooooh. I want to know the story behind James. Is he special?
| a reader chapter 21 . 7/9/2001
Please let Max go back to Logan!11 Keep up the great work and post more soon!
| KBeth91 chapter 21 . 7/9/2001
I love your stories, but can you make the chapters longer.