|Reviews for The lies of Machines|
| fishbunny chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
Finally, some people posting in the Metro section!
It's embarassing to say, but I feel like a ghost. I've been floating around this section everyday (more or less) since the day I started posting stories. And that was back in 2003. If you really think about it, it's kind of pathetic... XD But regardless, I make an effort to review all new stories that get posted here.
I must say, I'm very impressed. Is this going to be an on-going story, or just a one-shot? I believe it would work either way. You captured Rock in the traditional sense, but you added a little more flair than most. I know, it's hard to portray him as a normal person, right? LOL.
My favorite line: "...and he does his normal thing of only half-listening, straightening out the stuff on his desk and only really listening when I make a mistake."
I got a perferct, mental image of our good ol' Duke Red. Really, keep it up!