Reviews for The warrior in Me
Luinwen-2013 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
And he surely did!
SivanShemesh chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
It was well written, and i have some good suggestion to you, mellon-nin.

Add more chapters, do it like Gimli write a diary of what he learnt every day, to get the warrior in him.

Thank you for writing it, i hope to see more chapters from you, and more stories, you write well.

Sivan Shemesh
MiniFruitbat chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
Some editing is needed in the first paragraph, and I didn't find it particularly insightful, but at least you focused on a character who's normally overlooked.