Reviews for His Revenge
An Antidote chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
your story is good but it just needs more detail...
kaisarcy chapter 2 . 9/6/2006
yay an update, that was fast

still looking good

but can you make the next chapter a bit longer
Escape Through a Dream chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Well, I have 2 things to say

*I like the plot or what I think it is and I admit it is a promising start! goodluck for the future!

*second thing is that you could add a lit bit more description. The dialogue is good though.

now all you have to do is UPDATE SOON! ! !
Kaisarcy chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
this looks like it could be an interesting story

who is the mystery person?

will pan suffer?

will you update?