|Reviews for His Revenge|
| An Antidote chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
your story is good but it just needs more detail...
| kaisarcy chapter 2 . 9/6/2006
yay an update, that was fast
still looking good
but can you make the next chapter a bit longer
| Escape Through a Dream chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Well, I have 2 things to say
*I like the plot or what I think it is and I admit it is a promising start! goodluck for the future!
*second thing is that you could add a lit bit more description. The dialogue is good though.
now all you have to do is UPDATE SOON! ! !
| Kaisarcy chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
this looks like it could be an interesting story
who is the mystery person?
will pan suffer?
will you update?