17 years after this fanfic was published (years before they were canon) and i still think its one of the best i have ever read. I came across this back in 2018, and finally found it again. This story is so heartbreaking because its one of those scenarios that could have happened. Sakura suffered so much when sasuke left. Im just happy now that they are canon and have a daughter, with sasuke finally home.

I know youre not active but i hope you are doing well in life and that this story still have an effect on people after so many years.

This oneshot is fucking good, you are amazing. Maybe you should add part about thinking's Sasuke. That's perfection

Ngl this was good yet heartbreaking

Se nota que Sakura creyó que Sasuke Hiba a cambiar de opinión y es donde se equivocó, Sasuke se nota desconectado de lo que sucedió y no había más que sexo y nada más .
Sasuke no ve a Sakura como una pareja más que como una antigua conocida

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Es simplemente genial.

I don't get the reviews. Ofc Sasuke would never do this but he wasnt demonized in this fic nor was Sakura shown as a victim. It's just angst guys, it doesn't go that deep.

I hope you still read reviews! This feels so in cannon that it feels apart of the story. Teenage hormones is extremely spot on. just simply a wonderful fic even 15 years later

That was so beautifully written. The feels, the vulnerability, the angst, the awkward turn comfortable sex for the first time made this an instant favorite. These two were meant to be from the start.

Thank you for writing this.

It was very realistic and would have been a great concept, now that they indeed ended up together.

Hope you are doing great and continue to write (hopefully, professionally).

If you ever come back and Finnish you work, please continue Whirlpool and Scarlet.

Happy New Year to you and G-d bless.

This was awkward, painful and heartrending, an so very, very well-written... thank you!

This was stupid

To be honest, I have read this fanfic so many times. I think the author touched that teen hormone part. True, no matter how people deny it, sometimes physical contact can alter something within someone. It's sad, but I'm glad someone wrote this. I can see it happen g, because deep inside sasuke does feel something for sakura even then. And sakura, I think she can do this, have you ever felt like the love you bore for someone literally turns into physical pain, and all you needed is to feel them close. She did this as a last resort. It's painful but still, it's a part of her desperation to bring him back.

No one can deny that Itachi really did an incredible job screwing up Sasuke's head. Your psychological profile for this character was painfully accurate.

Your fic was strangely *tragic* but perfect of how it could have been between Sasuke and Sakura's relationship. Given the fact, that stupid Boruto next generation, has revealed that Sasuke did ended up marrying Sakura and have now a daughter.

Bravo - if you ever come back - please continue.

G-d Bless!

So sad but strangely sweet