|Reviews for Just Persuasion|
| Luiza Berti chapter 1 . 1/12
Hi! How are you? I'm Luiza, a brazilian girl. I really love your fanfic. Can I translate "Just Persuasion"? With your name, and everything! To the brazilians fans, they really love your work. Kissus.
| LotusMundane chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
So perfectly and accurately awkward. And painful, uncomfortable... I felt this weird pity and disdain because I didn't want her to do it, but I wanted her to be happy. And I wanted her to find something in doing it... It was strange. I never want to experience it either. :) But is was good; good writing and strong characters.
| E chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
| UchihaKudi chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Soo nice! This oneshot was deeply moving.. While reading I thought "This (amazing) writing style is somehow familiar" and when i visited your profile I noticed you are the amazing author of "the window". It's a pity that your are KakuSakushipper, because you should definitely write more of SasuSaku :)
| GaaraFox chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
That..was..amazing! It was heartbreakingly accurate to what would actually happen between Sasuke and Sakura in the manga (if it had juicy scenes like this, of course). Sasuke is such a difficult character to portray, that a lot of fanfictions that often end up "tweaking" his character a bit so that he's a little more emotional and human, but you were able to not only keep him in character, but bring out a very real and very possible side of him that is rare in a fan fiction.. Thank you! (:
| Amysteriouslondoner chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Hum..where do I start ?
I have mixed emotions towards this story. Don't get me wrong. It actually was spot-on on very aspect.
First of all, taking into consideraction that this scene would happen after their first reunion, both Sakura and Sasuke's characterization were SPOT-ON.
Second of all, I don't think I EVER read anybody who write like you do about human feelings on fanfiction with such realism while remaining perfectly CANON to the story.
I mean when I read the story at first, I didn't know whether I loved it or I hated it. I felt mortified by Sasuke's horrible and toxic behavior and Sakura's submission and lack of self-respect.
But that was exactly the point. That could not have happened in any other way than this one after their first reunion. Sasuke was too overwhelmed by hatred to be able to allow himself to feel any other emotion.
And that kiss scene in the end, just after they had sex, it was so toxic because obviously this is how a normal relationship should have started. But Sasuke and Sakura's interaction, and Sasuke's psychotic personality are anything but normal. This last kiss but he leave to me is the perfect representation of " what-could-have-been" iF...
This last scene was very bittersweet and sad. You perfectly captured the essence of Sasuke's vulnerability towards his own emotions and feelings towards Sakura even though it SEEMED to perfectly dominate the situation, this kiss he refused so badly at first proved the contrary.
So, I am just one more person to tell you from the bottom of my heart that you are GIFTED as a writer.
THANK YOU for writing suck an amawing piece of work.
| Somebody Random chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
God, I can't even begin to describe how much I love this fic. I read it for at least four times and it never ceased to amaze me how perfect everything is. Every little detail- just, it is so realistic it made me forget it is only a fanfiction and I really think this very scenario would be quite possible if Kishimoto-sama was into smut... ;)
Thank you so much!
| merple chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Beautiful and bittersweet SasuSaku fic.
| Syren chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Reading your fic again... Lol. Guess I'm a closet perv :3 It's hard for me to explain exactly whyyy I like this fic. To be completely honest. I never liked SasuSaku. The anime and manga portrayal of this pair did not sit well with me as I ,matured because I felt that the love Sakura had for Sasuke is somewhat destructive and tragic. Bringing nothing but tears and pain and idk, low self-esteem that she would supposedly love someone who didn't hesitate in trying to kill her. (In my mind, Sasuke would never give two-shits about her until he loses her. Which would only happen if she puts herself first).
I've only read a couple of other SasuSaku fics but the ones I read were angst-ridden, gut-wrenching and not quite bright enough to obliterate the darkness. Moreover some weren't realistic to me.
But your fic? Wow trumps 'em all. You got both characters in a pea pod. I like Sasuke attitude here. He's vulnerable because he chooses to be. He is not weighed down by the consequences of his choices, he seems aware of himself and what he's done. Cold. Bad-Ass. Knows that Naruto and Sakura will take him back no matter what he does and taking advantage of that. There is hope for him whenever he chooses it :)
I would love to read a fic where Sakura grows a up and rejects him. Hehehe. I can probably imagine one up myself but alas, I have no talent for writing, unlike you :P And okayyyy, this will be the longest review I ever posted. I only happened along this fic cause I had so exhausted ShikaTema (my favorite couple - portrayal of love's positive side)
Keep writing, we'll keep reading and thank you :D
| Syren chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Wow... Rough and Sensual. And GOD... I think I feel dirty... Smh. Was that your intention? I've read lemons before and I've never felt dirty... Lol!
I knew Sasuke would kiss her though... It was just perfect. And you are an exceptional writer!
Please write a companion to this, you don't even have to continue this story. I just want to hear the Sharingan-Boy's point of view. I took my cool time reading this fic, mortified and fascinated. You did an excellent job of both characters.
| AnatheDeath chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Wow, this is truly brilliant. ;)
I kinda hoped that Sasuke would ask Sakura to come with him in the end but that would be just too emotional for him. Overall, I am really amazed by your work, you totally managed to keep both Sasuke and Sakura in character and the descriptions... oh my. I just can't stop smiling, you really made my day by writing this. Thank you!
I'm sure you have a bunch of praising reviews so I'll just say you made another heartfelt fan, lol... ;) I know you back from KakaSaku stories and you probably aren't that much into other pairings but I really hope that someday you will write ItaSaku story (or oneshot). Or SasuSaku... lol, what can I say, I love the Uchiha brothers.
Much support there! :D
| Mad Zia Magdalena chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
... Dammit, you broke my heart. WHY?
I'm not much of a SasuSaku shipper, but this made me truly wish it could somehow work for them. Then I realized it can't. Great job.
| Viagra chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
made me cry... beautifully written
| A Midsummer chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Sasuke being vulnerable around Sakura is always my favorite. But this time, the ambiguous response that paralleled That Night made me more than heart broken for Sakura. You left her again. Even after committing such an intimate act, all you could give her is your sincere gratitude. Why, I would have asked if it weren't so futile. Not yet. Even then you can't.
| AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I am a sasusaku shipper...a sasusaku fic i.e,ds fic was supposed to give me the "feels"...but all i did while reading ds was cry cry & cry...yet i must say... Hands down,ds is UNDOUBTEDLY THE FINEST & THE BEST SASUSAKU FIC EVER...the character portrayal esp. Sasu's cold nature,the plot,the pain & agony of saku...everything was depicted exceptionally work!u are very talented.