Reviews for Just Persuasion |
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therentyoupay chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 Absolutely beautiful and breathtaking. |
Blossoming-Bn3k chapter 1 . 7/26/2011 WOW. Excellent story. Though I would have preferred to let Sasuke see Sakura's super strength before he left. x3 |
pandapple7 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011 i am simply in awe of this story. i didn't know what to expect and how it would turn out, especially when sakura's suggestion came up. but you wrote it so beautifully. the moments went by slow and steady, dragging with it all the emotion you wanted to portray, and so vividly! this was a wonderful piece, and near the end, i nearly felt teary...such a bittersweet ending, but it really highlighted my love for sakura and sasuke's complex relationship...this was amazing and i am so glad i came across it :) wonderful work and the emotion in this story really left me speechless and bittersweet at the end. and the icing on the cake was sasuke's verbal and physical reply to sakura's final words to him...simply breath-taking and i whole-heartedly mean every word :) |
MacieHeart'sCasey chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 This was just so stunning I didn't want it to end! But the ending tied the whole story together amazingly. Loved it so much! |
bobtheasker chapter 1 . 6/5/2011 This one-shot of sasu/saku was by far one of the best i have read. you keep the characters so in tune with their own nature and you capture the essence of the interactions beautifully. there is such a emotional attachment in this fic that it actually kind of pains me that you wont continue it! if its not to bold of me to ask, would it be possible for you to create a multi-chapter sasuke and sakura fic? its just that you do the characterization of sasuke really well and i can imagine that you can create a literal work of art doing a story with him in the main focus. your other peices of work clearly show your talent and i have much love for them. well anyways, sorry if this offends you but your work is great! keep up the good work love! |
EndlessFlame chapter 1 . 5/28/2011 This was wonderful. Sad, sentimental on Sasuke standards, and painstakingly, heartachingly beautiful. So much like them, which makes it even better. |
een nihc chapter 1 . 5/24/2011 i haven't read something as poignant as this in a long time. am so glad that i somehow stumbled upon this fic. definitely 1 of the best Sasuke/Sakura fanfic i've read. thank you so much for writing it. |
Innuenda chapter 1 . 5/20/2011 A few years ago, reading fanfictions was a huge hobby of mine. Things happened, I grew older, became interested in other things. I only started it again this week, finding myself extremly bored. Trying to find some nice stories, I remotely remembered reading this one, but couldn't remember neither title nor your name. I tried really hard to find it, didn't at first, only over stumpling upon another story of yours and researching what other brilliant stories you might had written. To sum this up, I still remembered details of this story from reading it years ago, and it's still as amazing as it was in my memory. Thank you! |
m3wm3w chapter 1 . 5/18/2011 would you reconsider writing SasuSaku again? this is by far, the best M-rated SasuSaku fic i've read..tasteful and very on-point! |
xxgabigailxx chapter 1 . 4/27/2011 ...I'm not even going to go into how this story personally reminds me of things, just know that you're an amazing writer and this story made me cry and it's beautiful and Sasuke is an asshole...god... |
Lord Woman chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 *sniffle* that was beautiful! |
critiquing chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 If there was any story that would perfectly describe the intensity between Sasuke and Sakura, well, it'd be this one. Somehow, you were able to wonderfully turn this rough situation of casual sex into beautiful passion; the hidden emotions of Sasuke and the pure desperation and melancholy of Sakura. I would praise more apart from your absolutely defined descriptions, blunt establishment of the two characters and the crystal-clear image that you paint for us in the story, but, I'm afraid I'd be here for the entire day. Amazing. |
loves it chapter 1 . 4/3/2011 oh man i think i need a sequel or i'll die! this story is great keep up the good work |
AnimeCoupleLover61 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 loved it! xD |
Pandora Imperatrix chapter 1 . 3/9/2011 Oh, it was... How say it? Was crude, I think crude is a word to discribe it, was so real, chocking real. Sasuke was a monster and Sakura unbearably I don't know, she just God, she don't have any self esteem! And this is the way they two are you exposed it so well that it scared the hell of me hahaha Congratulations, was crude, a little bit disturbing, but was a very good job. |