What is this bullshit. Sasuke is totally ooc. You guys are nuts with poor comprehension skills. If you read the manga, Sasuke is nothing like this. He knocked Sakura out because he didn't want to involve her in his business. He is not a fuckboy, quite the opposite. He rejects Sakura and Karin's advances everytime. And he has suffered way more than Sakura has. He lost everything at the age of just 7 but you people love making out Sakura to be a poor victim. Sasuke is actually a kind person.

So sad TT

This is such a beautiful story! I can see this happening if Naruto was a R18 manga. It really got their characters perfectly at that point of time, like how Sasuke deep down cares about her, but not enough to refrain from hurting her, and how far Sakura Is willing to go for him. Definitely one of the best stories on this site, it is so real and emotional, the point where he close her mouth when she's telling him 'I love you' really really got me

I loved how in the end his feelings betrayed his cold demeanor.

I've read this story for the first time a decade ago and I keep returning to it.
It is the gold standard of a story, the best story I've ever read, my most beloved one. Thank you so much for this.

Now when I look back, I think in every story I've read afterwards I looked for what you accomplished in this one - this distilled emotion, Sakura's love so strong that in bends space and time and in the end even Sasuke. Sadness of rejection and love that lasts despite every rejection big or small. Sex that is so organically connected to emotions.
This story is perfection. You probably won't even read or care about it since it's been so many years since you published it, but thank you once again.

The way you describe the situation and the feeling of Sakura is wow. Just wow.

I've got to say that your writing is good and they are totally not OOC but really I find this one shot so empty? like they only have sex, nothing more nothing less. its like this has been removed from another multichapter story and uploaded as a one shot. i don't mean to be rude but the plot is so simple, they saw each other and have sex, and thats it. As a fan who have been reading a lot of fanfic since 2005, I already read a lot of fanfic of this kind and this just didn't left a deep impression on me.

I have loved this story for years, it outclasses everything else ever written, in my opinion that is. Thank you!

And how I wish there was some kind of a after cannon ended/blank period/during cannon sequel to this, or fanfictions of this fanfiction.

Thank you so much! This is golden! Aun despues de tanto tiempo lo sigo leyendo como si fuera la primera vez! Desde ahora no me limitare tanto solo a los fics en español. Suerte que existe la traducción automatica (｡’’｡)

My heart broke for Sakura. I would really love it if you make a sequel. Like Sakura became pregnant perhaps? As a result of what Sasuke and Sakura did. I’m a sucker of happy endings.

this is beautiful

This is by far the most in character story I have read about these two. It was so realistic. Super refreshing. Thank you for this piece of art.

Beautiful, simply beautiful!

Beautiful! Every word and feel was perfect! Thank you VERY much for writing and sharing this amazing Oneshot with us here! ;D

Ow. Heartbreaking T.T ... but hot ;P I hope you find time to make a sequel. Urgh. Sooo hurting for Sakura. Great job!