oh my gah. i was like reading the sex scene through slightly closed eyes. *ahh my virgin eyes* i mean kinda awkard to like have sex with a guy that doesn't even share the same feelings as yours and even more awkard to have tell you to do some..stuff. yeah. but then i totally loved it when he kissed her. like i was clapping with joy. but then i got upset when he left her. no and it's a one shot. darn it. i must say this is one banging story. it really is. it's soo good. i'm giving it one of my rare long reviews. cause it's that god. it just has that great writing to it that makes you love it. which i did. not in a peaverted way. alright. fantastic story.

love always

nickygirl

WoW, erotic. I was not expecting it, but it was good nonetheless. I found that you kept the characters in character, and that is a high feat.

Ja Ne

sasuke fanatic1

Oh my god . . . that was brillant. Any story you write, no matter the pairing, is beautiful. They were so in character . . . your amazing! This is one of the best SasuSaku I've read, because most SasuSaku stories do not capture Sasuke's character. Just like you capture Kakashi's better than any other KakaSaku I've read in your other stories. I loved reading it, can't wait for you to update your other stories but take your time since all your fans will be waiting patiently waiting for your next release. *_*

Wow...This one shot was so passionate and real. I can't think of anything else to say. Very powerful fic.

omg..that was..so sad...T.T **starts crying** Poor Sakura... **sniff sniff**

Please tell me you are writing more. I want to know what happens after arriving back in Konoha. If Sakura gets pregnant or meets up with her true love Sasuke.

~wildflower

The ending was so sad...*sniff sniff*. Oh well, anyway, you wrote this one-shot beautifully. You're a very talented writer!

Oh, god... I... you... Just... GOD...!

I can't even think coherrantly right now... My fingers are shaking, and I swear, it will take another ten minutes before I can remember my own name...

I don't even LIKE SasuxSaku...!

It' just... You... And your writing... The way you write, how you can make anyone do anything, because you know exactly HOW they would do it...

I'm hurting... My heart feels like it's broken, just like Sakura's. I have NEVER felt this strongly with a character that I have read about before. Honestly, I forgot that I was reading it. I was just... living it (hope I'm not sounding like a pervert... I don't mean it like that ).

That kiss... It tore me apart. The lemon was so terrible to read (no, no, not like THAT, it was wonderful in that aspect, a true work of written art!), so unsatisfying, because there was no feelings... Because Sakura had to lock them in to even be able to do this and survive... But the kiss... Suddenly, there was to MANY feelings...

You're amazing. Simply amazing.

wow an incredible one shot! do you plan to make a sequel i mean astory sequel with sakura pregnant (the result of this night) ;

What do you think of it? i don't want to force you but you are a great writer and this one shot opens a large choice of possibilities to make a sequel! but i insist i don't want to force you so have a good afternoon and see you soon i hope!

awsome as always! nice story! very smutty and fluffy all rolled up in one. _

Your stories are truly treasures admist a bunch of junk i keep finding myself reading , and this one is no exception. Your characterization of Sasuke is real and almost vulnerable in the sense that he's still human. He's not sappy or emo which is fabulous, and Sakura is Sakura-enough said.

I'm not the biggest fan of sex scenes just because I never think they're done correctly, but your's was quite raw yet not vulgar at all.

Fantastic