|Reviews for Clandestine|
| The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
is this pauls pov?
| XoXoDarkBlossomFantasyyLvrXoXo chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
omg..I was loving it untilnit became a GAYY storyy..:( I thoght I was Jesse && sussannah..but nook it had to be Paul && Jesse? gr..:(
| ticklemecutie chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
are jesse and paul?
| I want to be Jesse's girl chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
lol! this is funny but seriously Jesse is not gay - that's the only thing that I don't like about the story - but its really well written and I enjoyed reading it
| mommyflaw chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
At first I thought it was Susannah, talking about Jesse and Maria. Then the end came and I went...O_o OMG! I liked it though. Never considered the pairing...
| CocoaSampson chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Well, it's very... different than anything I've ever read before. Writers who aren't bold enough tend to be boring. Very... surprising. I thought the narrator was Maria, and I had to reread it to actually get it. Daring... very daring... but my gag reflex hasn't gone off yet. Kudos for doing something different, though!
| Angel.By.Day-Devil.By.Night chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
wow..okay...that was unusual..to say the least. lol thought it was good but ...ew! llf
| Wait For The Stars chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
HOW COULD YOU!
| seaXdeep chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Oh wow. At first I was like "Jesse went with another girl?" And then of course, it all came together at the end. All in all, I loved it. VERY original and VERY humourous. Such lovely images are inserted into one's brain...
| Kirah Ruth chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
/Paul?/ That's... weird. But it made me laugh... I don't know why, but it did.
| Leena chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
Okay, I think I got this. Paul and Jesse were the ones going out? And the ones kissing? That's a new thing. Kinda strange, and just a little creepy, considering Jesse is like, the epitome of Masculinity basically. But, it was a good story!
| eternalxxshadows chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
personally, i find this kind of gross. i don't really go for the slash stuff. but despite what i think of jesse/paul this was really good. funny too. heh, never thought i'd like it but i did.
| erica chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
that was AWESOME! i laughed out loud at the end.
| Bluie Twilight Star chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
WOW! That was a shocker! I like it!
| marshmallowfluff25 chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
OMG! lol... i saw that coming! from the moment i read the A/N and started reading it... lol that was really good! i loved it!