|Reviews for Soul Voice|
| 00Sakura00 chapter 21 . 6/17/2009
I am very impressed with the originality of the storyline/ plot as well as your writing technique. I know you haven't updated this story in two years, but if you happen to ever read this I urge you to complete this story...I enjoyed your story very much and I'd really like to know how it ends.
| SHeWithNoName chapter 21 . 3/23/2009
you are a great writer! i can't wait to see more of this fic! it has a lot of potential
| Nuclear Burp chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I sense much promise in this fic! Continue onwards!
| Angry Paradox chapter 21 . 2/11/2009
| not logged in chapter 21 . 1/20/2009
This is a good fic. THe only one of its kind that I've come across actually. I've spent a good part of the evening reading it, and I want to congratulate you for writing something so unique. I like the fact that you've used Sakura as opposed to Naruto. And it isn't the same old story we've heard. You haven't just switched their lives. Things are actually occuring differently. Cudos, on that.
The only thing, (or things) that bothered me is the fact that as the story wears on, it seems to be less about Sakura and more about..well, everyone else. It makes it a bit confusing it at times to see so many POVs when at first we were only given Sakura's, primarily. Another thing is that in the first several chapters, it was made very obvious the prejudiceness everyone felt torwards her. Kakashi, Iruka, Kiba...Ino's parents, even. But it seems as though it's not quite an issue anymore. Not that it's been RESOLVED, but it just doesn't seem to be as much of a focal point, as though it's all but disappeared, and after so much emphasis was placed on it. Ofcourse, this could be because of the whole Orochimaru thing happening, but still.
I also found Hinata to be extremely OOC. Not in an unpleasant way, it's just that I found no evidence or purpose for her stark personality change. Maybe because the object of her affection, since he is not the village pariah here, is able to talk to her, give her confidence? I don't know. But like I said, it's not BAD, necessarily, just...a bit of a shock to see her teasing, confident ways.
Other than that, I love how you don't superpower her, how you showcase her weaknesses and emphasis her brain. Because in canon we were always TOLD that she was smart, but I'd never actually seen any cases to PROVE this, otherwise. I like what you've done. I do hope you don't abandon this fic, and I wonder if she'll still become a medical nin?
| camya chapter 21 . 10/19/2008
have you given up on this story? you haven't updated for a year though your story is so amazing.
such a pity :(
| Nostalgic Beauty chapter 21 . 10/5/2008
I love your story. It's very unique. You should be proud.
Post soon please!
| LixxyChan chapter 21 . 9/28/2008
I really enjoy this fanfic, and hope you update really soon. So do, mm'kay?
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| Lady Lark chapter 21 . 9/13/2008
Interesting story. I like how you have kept this gen and I absolutely adored Anko's and Sakura's description of how the curse seal works and why going to Orochimaru is a bad idea(tm). It made me laugh. I also liked the change in team structure. I think it works well and there is more team work.
My favorite part, though, was the preparation for the chuunin exams. I loved the scene where the different teams had their own objectives to acheive and how they carried them out. I even loved the technical victory going to Team 8. It was just well done overall.
I look forward to seeing more from you when this is ready. I really enjoyed what you have so far.
Thank you for sharing.
| polar chapter 21 . 8/31/2008
Hey! This is a great story, and I hope you'll continue it at some point! :D
| afitre chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Sasuke should've been in the team.
| jercque chapter 15 . 8/23/2008
i kept on forgetting that there are lots of situations that required sakura's presence instead of naruto. specifically, this gaara thing... i hope she will handle it well.
i can't help but think that maybe jiraiya will going to be her mentor too since, i heard, he knew a lot about seals.
i'm nearing chapter 21! and it makes me sad that after that there is absolutely no assurance that you will update.
| jercque chapter 14 . 8/23/2008
i really like your insight.
and you gave hinata some sense of humor! and growing a lot of confidence too!
and what the heck! flash news! pink haired kunoichi - tickled to death! i still can't stop laughing because of that! great strategy ino! i can imagine the absurdity of the situation in front of a certain "dead" uchiha... and it really makes me laugh.
the amount of frienship floating around sakura astounds me, i hope she'll not be suffocated by it.. hehe
poor shino, he wasn't able to prove his existence though.
| jercque chapter 13 . 8/23/2008
haha, wow! joint sessions with the other teams.. pretty exciting don't you think? i can't wait for it... especially for sasuke-kun...but i wouldn't be dissapointed much if he will not play a big part here. i'm more than satisfied with your work to demand his presence. toink..
the way you explained each and everyone's strengths and weaknesses is almost flawless. i appreciate how you let each member of the team balance their perfomance as a whole. i also appreciate the way you didn't make sakura to be absurdly powerful given her training and all. she's pretty much stronger compared to her manga self but not too powerful to warrant questionable source of power. and hey, if ever this story somehow survives until the Godaime can step in, i will congratulate sakura for managing to collect two Hokages as her mentors. *shakes hands with sakura* and hey, her medical training with tsunade might help her in her quest to improve her seals since you said that understanding the anatomy of the human body is important for such practice.
you're great in balancing things out, i wonder, are you related to sakura or anything? i wouldn't be surprised if you personally know her... haha 0
with regards to your notes on chap 12, using budhism makes sense in explaining sakura's meditation. i was wondering where could you possibly pull the idea for making those complicated seals.. you're simply a genius for making them though.
i had to comment on sakura's maturity. the reason you presented was acceptable and understandable. given the intelligence she possessed in the manga, it is no wonder how she could decipher those things she had discovered. you can play your cards well.
| jercque chapter 11 . 8/23/2008
i'm sorry i forgot to mention this earlier. making sakura a container of a bijuu is really hard to imagine but in my opinion you managed to make it adequately believable or more so.
one thing though, why can't i imagine a demon-possesed sakura? maybe i'm not just that imaginative? heck. maybe it's more on sakura's soft features uhm... except for the inner sakura thing of course.
and wow, hinata and naruto saw sakura transform! hinata proves to be a major character here. (not that i didn't notice it before). nice diversion...
poor sakura, why couldn't she use the demon to her advantage as often as naruto could in the manga - which was not really always - but i guess, it's just fair since she'll be able to develop her skills rather than be dependent of the kyuubi's power.
kakashi's guilt trip was nicely explored.