Reviews for A BOX OF MEMORIES 'still no fish in my pond'
gater62 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Only you could so excellently describe Jack's neck and hands! LOL! You are such an emotional writer-you take me through their ups and downs brilliantly!
SGAussie chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
A beautifulstory, thank you for staying true to the characters.
Aveo amacus chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
This is so good.

I thought your line about the saying "if you love someone, let them go. If they come back to you then they’re yours, if they don’t then they were never yours." was so true, but also fits with the rest of their story; Jack lets her go to Pete, but she comes back to him because they belong to each other. I thought that was really powerful.

Well done
smithcrafter chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
I really didn't want it to end here, either! We didn't get to see Sara's reaction to Sam being introduced as Jack's fiancee.
JadedOne47 chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
WOW... you truly made me cry...

That was just brilliant...

I still have tears streaming down my face as I type...
sjaddict chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
Wow...wish i was a writer and could verbalize better. Suffice it to say that stusue said it perfectly!
Caroline ONeill chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I like but what would happen if Sara came back and the front door was open she she walked in. Such a great story please keep it going.
ColaBear chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Lovely story... I enjoy it...
angelfire east 24 chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
Another brilliantly written story. This one was very sad yet not so since Sam was there for Jack. Jack letting her in, Sam just being there for him really gave picked up my spirts:)

I'd love more to this story but it's so complete as is.:) Anyway my point is this is a beautiful story:)
stusue chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
What an incredibly powerful fic! You opened a tiny window into the emotional lives of Sam and Jack and let us peek inside. The emotions were almost tangible, the tension, palpable. You allowed us, for a brief moment, to witness the unimaginable grief that Jack feels following the loss of his son, and the comfort and support Sam brings him through her unconditional love. You also show us the warmth, caring, support and strong bonds of friendship. Beautiful writing, beautiful fic, thank you for sharing. :o)
BettyHall223 chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
I read your story "Words Withheld" first and had to check and see if you had other stories. Just finished this one. You captured their voices so well in this one, pure Jack and Sam. The emotions were well realized. Jack and Sam know each other so well and it came across in this story. Excellent! I do hope you write other stories.
dyslecksec chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Intense. Nonverbals are one of Jack & Sam's hallmarks and you portray, illustrate, and communicate them with incredible clarity and power. Bravo!
Natters chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
wow. very powerful ficlet
AT Fan chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Great story. Are you sure that this is your first fic. I could totally feel their emotions as the scene unfolded. Truly beautiful. Constructive criticism would be to proofread or get a beta reader because you did have some mistakes in the spelling and grammar area but not enough to detract much from the story. I think that you need a sequel and I would be glad to help you if you wanted me to.
Aria-wolfstar chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
cute _ a little OOC but still cute!
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