Reviews for Chronically Late
Birdie chapter 7 . 6/20/2011
Wow, I loved your fanfic, but it was so sad. (

You did a wonderful job of creating each scene. It really drew me into your fic.

Although your ending was sad, I don't think it was overused. I only recall seeing this kind ending in 1 other fanfic.

Well done. P.S. You should really mark this as complete XD
sweetsarcastic chapter 7 . 10/27/2008
Filled with fluff, and well written. The ending has been used before, but I still loed it. Thank you for the story!
ShhListen chapter 7 . 6/27/2008
i feel so sry for sukara and syaoran

i really hope this dosent happen in tsubasa
cheng chapter 7 . 6/23/2008
well that was depressing!
cheng chapter 6 . 6/23/2008
YAY! SAY YES! ahahahaa.

eriol and tomoyo are so cute.
cheng chapter 3 . 6/23/2008
yay sakura!
cheng chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
ahahahaa. nice chapter.
cheng chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
ahahaha niice iintro chap.
atinykerfuffle chapter 7 . 10/7/2007
Aw!

*is sad*

Sequel! Sequel!
buddhabelly chapter 7 . 9/28/2007
omg! that started so cute! why the abrupt ending? it gots me confused
Queenie chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I...*chuckles*...just so happen to hate anyone...*laughs*...who kills off any half of...*whips out knife*...(in a whisper)Sakura...and...Syaoran. *walks slowly toward Numina*
Musette Fujiwara chapter 7 . 4/21/2007
no she isn't late anylonger is she?

MAn it was so sad, you know I really thought you'd make it an happy ending, not like this... You probably wanted to kill me right now...

Thanks... For telling me what the mourning clothes in china was I didn't have a clue it was white.

About the squel? I don't know how you'd make it. It can't be a S&S due to the fact you killed her! But it would be nice to see where your imagination would take you...
S.A.Blossom chapter 7 . 4/15/2007
She DIED?

and this is supposed to be a humor story HOW EXACTLY? Not that I'm saying you wrote a bad thing or anything, the story was so nice but I actually CRIED!

maybe I didnt read it good enough, can you please tell me if she really did die or no? although I already think I know the answer.

and if she did die then change the genre plz.
Acaylee chapter 7 . 11/20/2006
So sad… ;_;

One tear fell out, one tear blinked away and a few more tears fell out but after a while… so sweet and sad… would that be bitter sweet?

She was an angel…

This could have been a one shot, I reckon that would have been better because it’s so strange to suddenly skip five years between an interval of a chapter… and a story is usually way more developed and this is kinda short n sweet… like iris dreamer’s ‘Through Your Eyes’, that worked as a one shot except it was SO long... I lub that. Yeah, I reckon this would be a better one shot than a chaptered story because you skipped a lot in their relationship, just showed the beginning of the romance, got to the end, showed their first encounter… a chaptered story would have the romance blossoming but you entirely skipped it to the end…

"So do I, always and forever will."

That’s so sweet… I’m glad I read it… even if I was supposed to study for history and commerce yearly tomorrow.

As for a sequel… how will you be able to write a sequel? Sakura visits Syaoran ten years later as a ghost? Syaoran dies and they finally can be together? Pretend nothing ever happened? Time travel back and stop everything?

They all seem pretty weird ideas to me… though I would like to see how it would happen… your ideas, my ideas for a sequel for this is pretty limited and wacky. Maybe you could do something like iris dreamer’s ‘Grace Of An Angel’… another one of her one shots. Yes, I really lub iris dreamer…

Like Sakura visits Syaoran as an angel… you would have to read it to understand. It’s sweet and it works, maybe a bit fast though. That would be the only idea I say would work for this as a sequel, because you made a pretty definite ending for this.

Well, cyas!
Acaylee chapter 6 . 11/20/2006
OMG! That’s so sweet… except I must say it was kinda fast. He had a fight with her and wasn’t even that sure she would come yet he still had a ring… weird. But sweet nevertheless.
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