|Reviews for The Colour of Envy|
| Hibisha chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
This is such an amazing story! FRHHCS##25*83!
OMG! KaiXTala and KaiXBrook! I am in lurve with this!
| kai lover chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Please do a sequel when Brooklyn n kai get closer
| Map of the Stars chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Sooooooo... Naturally, after just reading Sinners, I just HAD to read this.
Fantastic one-shot! I see that you have a thing for BrooklynKaiTala...haha. XD
I've read quite a few Brooklyn oneshots (No one uses him often, though! He needs more love...) and this has to by far be the best. I did read one other one that was equally as impressive, but it took a TOTALLY different route to this one.
Honestly? If you ever found the time, I really think you could make a full story out of this... It's an odd combination of pairings, but well, you have one person right here that would be interested in reading it. ;D
Also, WOO! I'm totally honoured to be the 50th reviewer. XD
| Chaseha-Wing chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Bryan: what's up?
Tala: Nothing! 'y do I feel as if the lord of darkness is after me?'
lol, poor tala. I hope he can run fast. Oh well, bryan's there for violence if things get out of hand.
| Quarry chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
this was so cool being from Brooklyns POV and i really liked the interesting facets that it added. when i got to the end i sat there for a while with a feeling of awe and amazement. Well done this whole thing is fab!
| dark-phoenix-4eva chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
i LOVE this story!
i kept getting confused if it was Tala or not...
Will there be a sequel for what happens the next year? If Brookie gets his prize?
| Tom chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
| mistressluckless chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
omg this story is ace...i thnk u shuld continue it coz seriously this has the potential to be an excellent story anyway great story
| Elves of the Moon chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
YAY! I absolutely loved this one.
It's a shame I only found out about its existense now
(I should have read it the day it was posted)
I can easily immagine Brooklyn obsessing over Kai
and indeed, Kai was definitely a couple with Tala during G-Ref :)
Tala and Brooklyn are so much alike, when it comes to appearance of course.
Theu both are taller than Kai, have fiery-coloured hair (thought Brooklyn's is a bit more orange I think)
and both have eyes tinted by blue (Ice-blue for Tala where Brooklyn is more green-like to my opinion)
Tyson was only able to win his match against Brooklyn because of the strike Kai had dealt earlier on. (you know, once tasted the defeat... a second time is on the way because you now know what it can be like... or something like that)
Anyway, I thank you to present us such a marvelous fic
and until I read you again in another one ;D
| ColdBlackRaven chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
like always. A great story.
| Kirie Hiiwatari chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Oh my! Poor Brooklyn! I'm glad he's with Tala though...perfect couple! That was really good Ladya writers block? Dont think so! Keep up the good work!
| GypsyWillow chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
I absolutely love your style of writing and this story was perfect. I liked Brooklyn's point of view and the fact that you made his thoughts so analytical. So many times people write him as flaky or out of it but he is a genius after all so it makes sense he would always be analyzing situations. Normally I like Kai with Tala or Ray but Brooklyn would be an interesting pairing if done properly and the way you write these characters I bet it would be a great story and yes I admit that was a hint for more ;)
| Sam chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
can't remember if I said this already, but you could prob make this a great story if you so chose.
Having said that, I like it as a oneshot oo. Leaves more to the imagination.
| J.J. Banks chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
-raises hand- Interested.
That was an interesting take on Brooklyn's POV, I quite enjoyed it.
| Sam chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
I would love for you to develop the plot further. I feel you left us a cliffhanger there. (i knew it was Tala when you said 'Russia's 2 most fearsome bladers') Please continue. dying to know what happens nxt. Just try not to hurt Tala _, I love the Tala/Kai and the Rei/Kai paring
Sincerly, Yaoi luvr