|Reviews for The Void|
| Kevin Kosarych chapter 22 . 6/6
so... why haven't they just reverse summoned Naruto via toads again...?
| JustDusty chapter 15 . 4/29
i've read 15 chapters and i don't understand what's going on in this story. what the fuck did itachi tell naruto that made him runaway. what the fuck did orochimaru tell jiraiya that made him runaway. what the fuck is this story even about?
| Sprengkamp chapter 29 . 3/15
Th for the chapter
| Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 29 . 3/7
So long since this was finished. Is the sequel abandoned or have you simply got a block on that for a while?
| Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 26 . 3/6
Bahahahaha Monty Python for the win!
| qalleesyawesome chapter 15 . 12/6/2019
Ohhh my gadd! Hahahaha im sooo excited for this part.. But i knew you were gonna make her remember when she couldn't do anything about it.
| GrimStormWind chapter 29 . 11/23/2019
| Guest chapter 29 . 9/18/2019
Please Update! UPdate! UPDATE! Thank You. -_-
| mckertis chapter 13 . 4/22/2019
| mushy guillotine chapter 8 . 3/16/2019
Tadakatsu Honda was the blindly loyal samurai of Tokugawa Ieyasu. I can see your thinking here.
| BullC6 chapter 14 . 1/29/2019
Okay. Nothing has happened in this story so far that would actually attract further reading. Everything is shrouded in so much mystery that it feels like a fools errand reading on if all of it didnt pay off in some grand way. There are so many OC, or may be even some filler characters that I don't know and you haven't made an effort for us to care about the extra characters. The OC's in Legacy Undone seem like unique and attractive characters compared to this one. The biggest thing I would say that is lost in all the mystery is Naruto as he seems like a non-factor in the grand scheme of things the way you are carrying him even though you constantly try to hammer in his importance. Like not diving into his psyche more given that he had gone through so much trauma and change.
I never thought I would be giving a negative review for anything you wrote as Lost Soul was brilliant given when you started and Legacy Undone gets better every chapter. But there is a first time for everything my friend.
| BullC6 chapter 9 . 1/28/2019
Okay this story seems awesome suspense wise but the substance of the suspense seems a little wayward or lacking. Still your writing is awesome and even if it is no Legacy Undone it is still better than most crap out there.
| mckertis chapter 29 . 1/28/2019
Artsy presentation - missing substance.
| BullC6 chapter 5 . 1/28/2019
Okay, confusing, mysterious and intriguing at the same time.
| BullC6 chapter 3 . 1/28/2019
Woah this is some fucked up shit here