|Reviews for Carmine Complex|
| T o x i c T e d d y z chapter 7 . 5/12/2017
Every couple of years I come back on this website just to read this fucking gem again. It breaks my heart you guys stopped writing You both are amazing writers and I seriously love you for writing this thank you so much add me on tumblr or something you guys are seriously amazing .com
| NikeScaret chapter 7 . 2/6/2016
Dude. It's been 8 FREAKING YEARS! UPDATE! Because, personally, this is one of the funniest stories I have ever read, and it's ended in a cliffhanger...why oh why must you kill me?
| HeartOfPopsicles chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
I'm really intrigued in the story now. I love the plot, how you portray the character's personalities- everything! Really amazing story so far, can't wait to read more.
| tarouchoo chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
Awes dont feel that way! Hopefully people will start to review and understand the joy o u o
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/15/2013
"Why should I write for a group of lazy kids"?
Shit, son. I know this was last updated in 2008 or something, so you've probably forgotten about it... But still. That's some rude shit right there. Write because you want to, not because you need someone to stroke your fragile ego EVERY time they read your story. I read this back when I was a senior in High School in 2009. My best friend and I would quote stuff from this fic all the time, and we thought it was hilarious. I got the random urge to find it and read it again, which I did... But I had forgotten that it was unfinished, which is always a bummer. Plus I never bothered to read through your novel-length author notes, so I was pretty disappointed when I noticed how you ended things. This fic is funny, and you guys have great imaginations... I even ignored the fact that judging by your writing, none of you had smoked or done any sort of drugs before writing this fic. It was still fun to read, despite that. I can safely say that my perceptions of you guys have been soiled by reading your author's notes. : I hope you grew out of that stage and continued to improve your writing, 'cause it was promising.
| L.I.N.A.T chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
Like the talking to technology that Axel was doing at the beginning. I do that all the time. Also, while Tidus isn't the first person that would come to mind when thinking a bout who to pair Xigbar with, I think it will grow on me. :)
| L.I.N.A.T chapter 4 . 2/22/2013
Okay, I'm sorry if I'm wrong, but it seems to me that the Castle Soul game or whatever is pretty much Kingdom Hearts. I mean, Aros; Sora. Kiru; Riku. Third party girl: Kairi. Aladin, Jafar, mermaid worlds, etc. It's pretty obvious.
| L.I.N.A.T chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Really like it.
| L.I.N.A.T chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
I really like this. :)
| L.I.N.A.T chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Okay, so you might not have meant it to be like this, but the "Oblivion High" thing is pretty funny. I mean, he's a smart kid (because he was going to a private school) and then he's going to a public school, which is live 'oblivion'. I would know because I used to go to a public school, but when I transferred to a private school I realized that a public school really is like oblivion to a really smart kid. Sorry, went off on a tangent there. Sorry if that didn't make sense. Everyone tells me I have a unique thinking process. :)
| PureOcean chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
I've really enjoyed this story so far. -Also, I apologize, but I'm not that amazing reviewer that can tell you exactly what they love. I enjoyed reading about Axel and Roxas. I've enjoyed the plot thus far and Cloud's Anti-Reno. Considering the last time it was updated I won't hope for new chapters, but thank you for posting what you have.
| Liz chapter 7 . 1/12/2013
I like what you write. I know you haven't posted for this story for a few years. I still like what you write, that won't change.
| Liz chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
I really like the Xigbar/Tidus pairing, especially in this fic, and is that a Charles de Lint reference in the 'Good Morning Wherever the Hell you are' show? Have I mentioned how much I love you guys? I should definitely say it more often, I love you guys!
| Liz chapter 4 . 1/11/2013
I really enjoyed the random shouts of video game playing in the phone call. It's nice to know I'm not the only one who does that : ) This is definitely one of my favourite fics!
| nothingespeciallyunique chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
Omigod, this is amazing! It's funny and just, I can't describe it other than this is the best thing in the world! Please continue this story! It breaks my heart to know it hasn't been updated in 2 and a half years!