|Reviews for Carmine Complex|
| omg plz no chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
Ok that simily with sora and the cell phone in the begining of the chapter? quite possibly the most awesome immagery i have evr experianced ever. oh a completely seperate note, i am really surprised about how well xiggy and tidus seem to work here. that pairing has never EVER occured to me, but it just... it just works. (here at least)
| omg plz no chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
Ahh, this story is great so far, it reminds me why i loves me teh gothical childrenz(oooo i lurves dem soooo much -) anyway, very amusing, demyx is hilarious, c'est tres amusont. good job! *loves*
| Cole chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I'm sueing you because I died while reading this story. I choked on my own laughter and died because this was impossibley funny. I am sueing you from heaven.
PS: I am still having random insane fits of giggles! I BLAME YOU!
| AnimositysDaughter chapter 7 . 5/21/2011
I loved this story. It was funny witty and had drama. It kept me reading for 6 hours straight. My eyes burn and I think I forgot to blink, Thats how in to this story I was. So please please please PLEASE continue writing?
| Axelgrl8 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
U NO WAT!U NEED TO UPDATE ALREADY BEFORE I RIDE OVER THERE ON MY MAGICAL,RED UNICORN NAMED AXEL MAKE HIM BLOW U UP,DAMMIT!
| Zeronumbers96 chapter 7 . 3/25/2011
I really like your story keep up the good work!
So please continue writing!
| AnimeFanCrazy197 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
I really like this story. My best friend, Axelgrl8, IS C-R-A-Z-Y about Axel and won't shut up about him for 5 minutes at skool. Please Update too!
| axelgrl8 chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
FUCKING UPDATE ALREADY GODDAMMIT!I'M ON FREAKIN' LIFESUPPORT,WRITIN MY FUCKIN WILL BECAUSE OF HOW BAD MY AXEL WITHDRAWL IS GETTING! isli..REMEMBER ME AS AXELS OBSESSIVE FANGIRL!the...light...growing...closer...(curls up in a ball and breaksdown mentally&emotionally)
| axelgrl8 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
*sob*,*sob*-PLZ UPDATE ALREADY GODDAMMIT! I'M SUFFERING FROM AXEL WITHDRAWL! I NEED MY FIERY,JADE-EYED SEX GOD!
| TwinKeyblader chapter 7 . 2/24/2011
I just finished reading your story so far, and am appalled... with myself that is...
I can't think of anything better to say other than that it rocked! :)
I have read from this site many times before even though I have just created an account, and I have yet to find another story or
writer/s that have a command of humor like you do(1). Also like the referencing to characters from other series/stuff(2).
The only things that I saw that might need a little work/fixing was grammar, some missing/duplicated words, and spelling.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.s.- sorry for such a short review! Will try to get better at it to be more helpful.
Ex.1- When the gang has a conversation about their pets
Ex.2- Sasuke the Emo Cat, Naruto the Moomba, Sakura the Pink Chocobo, Sai(I think that you were referring to this one?)-Naruto / Jack Spicer- Xiaolin Showdown / etc.
| Ulquiarra chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
Hey, this stuff is really good. Other than a few errors like vengance instead of vengeance, it's perfect! I really hope you guys update soon!
| Shikaaras girl chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
ahhhhh! Love this so much! X.O
| axelgrl8 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
IF U DONT FUCKIN REVIEW,I WILL DIE OF AXEL WITHDRAWL! TRUE FUCKIN CHIZZ,PERSONS!
| hello chapter 7 . 2/19/2011
I WILL WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE
(unlikely but whatever)
I LOVE YOU, YKNOW. YEAH BABY I DO
| Levitarius chapter 7 . 2/17/2011
Um, I'mkindofinlovewiththisstory. Thanks. Buh-bye.