|Reviews for Carmine Complex|
| wewritten chapter 7 . 10/23/2010
I absolutely loved this! It's kind of sad that this probably never gets finished, because it's really good. I cried of laughter, more than once!
Well, just wanted to let you guys know that you've done a GREAT job on this, even if it's not finished! Definitely one of the best fanfictions I've ever read.
| RobinMarlesuth chapter 7 . 7/10/2010
I review! I review! Please don't feel baaaaaad... D: I like this story. I do!
As another author, (although I have problems with my computar and can't post them on *sigh*), I know how it feels to be saaad that no one reeevieews. T-T
I really like how you made the organization real and fun characters. I mean they're good in the games, but some people portray them in AU horribly. I am very picky about AU's because of that. But you do a wonderful job!
Just a side note... I read many stories where Cloud is Roxas' older brother. Why is that? :? It confuzzles me.
I can't wait to see how Cloud/Leon moving back in affect Roxas and Axel's relationship. ;) Please update!
| Skuldorai chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
There were times where I sort've lost interest in the plot but other than that...
I laughed. A lot.
Xigbar as a stoner Classic XD
Aside from the fact that it was very humourous, I also give props to you for having very few ooc moments (excluding Xigbar of course).
| Dragon Age Sketchz chapter 7 . 6/24/2010
I love this story! Please update soon! U left me with so maany questions! If u don't update, I will sick ur version of cloud on u and tell him u raped his poor little Roxas! xD
But over all this is an excellent story and I'm hungry for more!
| A Nony Moose chapter 7 . 6/21/2010
NOOOOOOOOO THIS WAS SO GOOD! we appreciate you!
sniffle. i want more tiddy!
| A Nony Moose chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
This is so good i love it! Instead of studying for finals, im reading this. oops haha
| Nalyx chapter 7 . 6/16/2010
hey! i started reading this after my friend sent it to me and it's amazing! although i did start shouting angrily to the sky when Demyx rejected Zexion. why? anyway awesome story! although i do think you use the word aforementioned way too much. other than that i have no problem with the story! :D it's awesome and i love the story line XD please update soon!
| Caeruleo chapter 7 . 6/11/2010
| Donna chapter 7 . 5/28/2010
Wow... I only just found this thing yesterday and I'm already hooked! (And finding all the other fics) Aw, man, I can't wait for summer. School's out, forever!
| Reyaa chapter 7 . 5/22/2010
Oh this story is brilliant! You guys write amazingly! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| bbb136 chapter 7 . 5/22/2010
Wow this story is freaking awesome! I love your use of similies, and now I luv how you've potrayed cloud. Dud Reno try flirt with leon? Update please! :)
| Shayala chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
I love this story! I think over-protective-and-more-than-a-little-neurotic Cloud is my favorite character. I hope you write more!
| Insomnia's lover chapter 7 . 4/24/2010
This story is positively wonderful! It had me laughing so much my parents left the room because I wouldn't shut up(no, srsly). To be totally honest, I almost had a spazz attack as soon as I recognized the Eyeshield 21 references. Please continue updating.
| toudara chapter 7 . 4/11/2010
I'm in love with this story, you guys. I keep coming back to check if there's an update, because that would totally make my day.
That thing with the clarinets so true. The clarinet section was always the largest in band...next were the other woodwinds and the brass.
Everyone stays in character throughout the fic and even though I love Axel, Demyx and everyone, I can see why they'd annoy some of the other characters xD. Also, it's really easy for me to identify with your Roxas.
Keep up the hard work, ok? I'll continue to check back every so often for updates on your fics!
| xEpIcxXxfAiLx chapter 6 . 4/11/2010
... I have an objection to that clarinet comment :) okay shutting up now. Good story so far, cause I barely even like yaoi but I'm in love with your story.